Lonely Moon Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Lonely Moon

Rating: 5.0


The splintered day ends
now the night will come
dressed in shreds
tugging its blanket of stars
and on its frayed ends
a pale and lonely moon

Lonely Moon
Thursday, April 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: moon,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 28 April 2016

Tucked in with a blanket of stars

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T Rajan Evol 28 April 2016

Great composition, nice imagery.10

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M Asim Nehal 20 September 2018

Thanks Much Mr T

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Nosheen Irfan 28 April 2016

Brilliant write. What a lovely imagery. Top marks.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 April 2016

Marvelous flight of imagery. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 April 2016

Dressed in shreds! Nice piece of work.

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