Lonely Rain Poem by Sandra Feldman

Lonely Rain

Rating: 4.4


Not loving you
Leads to no where,
The Tempest is still there!
The same longing,
The same drowning
Rain
Born, like in birth
From pain.
Yes, I can swim,
But not without you,
Not even,
Life, can I
Totally regain...

Sunday, April 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: lonely,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellen Ni Bheachain 23 April 2020

Lovely but sad poem of heartbreak. However, really enjoyed reading your poem.

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Jane Campion 17 June 2019

A wonderful poem dear Sandra. It has your beautiful soul impressed in every word.

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Sandra Feldman 17 June 2019

Dear Jane, I really don't have the words to humbly thank you for yours. But, your more than kind sentiments in what you have said, will remain, unforgettably and gratefully in my memory and heart always.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 April 2019

there is rain here a pain is born you gain again the life in shattered torn yet; everything is okay cause you are the life quay!

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Sandra Feldman 17 June 2019

Thank you for reading and for your kind encouragement.

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