dear beloved
time flies unheeded
our days apart stretched
our love tormented
punctured by the passing time
temptations in our hearts
threatening our accord
intoxicating our minds
with wild thoughts
brainwashing our hearts
with forbidden desires
the source of wickedness
dear beloved
the boat of our love
is ever rocked by the feisty winds
hostile waves bashing us nonstop
bruising our hearts
with their powerful emotions
breaking our love
with their convincing force
severing our bond
with their sharp edge
condemning our love
with their lightening touch
dear beloved
hold onto our love
do not allow time to trick you
stay away from those temptations
abstain your mind from those wild thoughts
never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires
pray hard for the feisty winds to pass
and the storm to die
for the boat of our love is strong.
I like this poem so much. It speaks to the fears inherent in a long distance romance. Fears of being forgotten or replaced. Very well done. Trish
Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.
Great poem. It reaffirms our faith in the bonds of love even in the face of adverse circumstances. Thanks for sharing the poem on PH.
dear beloved hold onto our love do not allow time to trick you stay away from those temptations abstain your mind from those wild thoughts never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires pray hard for the feisty winds to pass and the storm to die for the boat of our love is strong. Verily, a great write........10
never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires pray hard for the feisty winds to pass and the storm to die for the boat of our love is strong.So very true, long distance is oft a problem
I came across this beautiful poem and I must write here 5 Stars Full for this impressive poem. I nhave enjoyed very much. A brilliant presentation and an excellent poem
A beautiful poetry reflecting the true essence. Indeed long distance love is very difficult and demanding. Every feel and every word is true. Great work.
dear beloved/hold onto our love/do not allow time to trick you/stay away from those temptations....wonderful expression! A brilliant poem....loved reading it...10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A niece poem that shows the undeniable temptations that lovers must conquer! Thanks