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Friday, December 12, 2014

Long Distance Love

Rating: 4.9
dear beloved
time flies unheeded
our days apart stretched
our love tormented
punctured by the passing time
temptations in our hearts
threatening our accord
intoxicating our minds
with wild thoughts
brainwashing our hearts
with forbidden desires
the source of wickedness

dear beloved
the boat of our love
is ever rocked by the feisty winds
hostile waves bashing us nonstop
bruising our hearts
with their powerful emotions
breaking our love
with their convincing force
severing our bond
with their sharp edge
condemning our love
with their lightening touch

dear beloved
hold onto our love
do not allow time to trick you
stay away from those temptations
abstain your mind from those wild thoughts
never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires
pray hard for the feisty winds to pass
and the storm to die
for the boat of our love is strong.
Kenneth Maswabi
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
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COMMENTS
Duke Perry Abrokwa 26 December 2020
Beautiful, true love.
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Varsha M 06 July 2020
A beautiful poetry reflecting the true essence. Indeed long distance love is very difficult and demanding. Every feel and every word is true. Great work.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 February 2020
dear beloved/hold onto our love/do not allow time to trick you/stay away from those temptations....wonderful expression! A brilliant poem....loved reading it...10++
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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 November 2019
Most Beautiful Message. I cite your last lines here: never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires pray hard for the feisty winds to pass and the storm to die for the boat of our love is strong. Then nothing can harm. Love that is strong will endure all storms. Excellent Poem of Strong Faith. Thank you for sharing. A 10 Full Score. You write very interesting topics, .
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A creative and compelling composition that is crammed with commitment. Well done!
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 03 September 2017
dear beloved hold onto our love do not allow time to trick you stay away from those temptations abstain your mind from those wild thoughts never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires pray hard for the feisty winds to pass and the storm to die Beautiful love letter for the beloved. A nicely penned poem. 10+++. Subhas
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Ernest Makuakua 20 January 2016
dear beloved hold onto our love do not allow time to trick you stay away from those temptations abstain your mind from those wild thoughts never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires pray hard for the feisty winds to pass and the storm to die for the boat of our love is strong. you know i'm inspired and motivated. thanks for sharing
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 21 October 2015
dear beloved hold onto our love do not allow time to trick you stay away from those temptations abstain your mind from those wild thoughts never open the lid of the pot of the forbidden desires pray hard for the feisty winds to pass and the storm to die for the boat of our love is strong. Verily, a great write........10
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Patricia Clark 25 February 2015
I like this poem so much. It speaks to the fears inherent in a long distance romance. Fears of being forgotten or replaced. Very well done. Trish
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Elisha Wall 20 January 2015
A niece poem that shows the undeniable temptations that lovers must conquer! Thanks
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