Looking Down From My Balcony Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Looking Down From My Balcony

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As I sit on my bed
Golden orange sheets,
Made of silk, my head
Tilted, combing my hair,
The wind pushes the
Wooden door of the balcony
Slightly ajar bringing
In the melancholy tunes
Which you sing for me,
The ivory comb drops
To the marble floor
My white veil touching
The floor, rush to the
Door pushing it apart
With my pink hands
And enter the balcony,
The peacock dances
In the lush lawns,
Roses bloom, Nightingale
Sings and there I see
You my handsome Prince
Standing with arms folded
Over your broad chest
Looking up at me with
A smile as I look down
From my balcony

A sequel to the poem Balcony from poet Sadiqullah Khan

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.Wardha Jawdat 01 November 2008

how romantically you weave a scene.....very moving.

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Sandra Fowler 29 October 2008

As enchanting as a fairy tale. May you both live happily ever after. Lovely work. Warm regards, Sandra

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Seema Chowdhury 28 October 2008

wow, very nice and decsriptive poem. i actually felt i was there watching it with you. well done.

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Alison Cassidy 28 October 2008

The scene you depict in such lush detail might have come from a Bollywood movie. You take the reader to a far-away land where the air is filled with the scent of sandalwood and the eye, dazzled by a confusion of sumptuous colour. A romantic poem from a romantic heart. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Manonton Dalan 28 October 2008

grirrl thi is romeo and juliet. very nice thanks. md

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Abhilash Gopi 03 December 2008

Very romantic. Got me straight to the heart. Reshma. Keep writing more like this.

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Seth Mutau 10 November 2008

wow, romantic staff, i really like the code of your poem...it goes deep in the heart...and hey be careful, i might just fall for your poem..hahahah! ! ! ! ! ! ! just joking....but great poem straight 10 from me

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Min Sia 09 November 2008

So romantic..I could imagine such loving look from that prince's eyes!

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iop fga 02 November 2008

Classic and romantic. Very nice work.

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Mimzy Sue 01 November 2008

very nice imaginary, romantice and so sweet.... Like it very much.

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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