Looming Large.... [ Inspired By The Poem "Linda Bella" By Linda Bella Wassermeister; Obesity; Humor; Marriage; Check Her (Poems)out! ! ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Looming Large.... [ Inspired By The Poem "Linda Bella" By Linda Bella Wassermeister; Obesity; Humor; Marriage; Check Her (Poems)out! ! ]

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You are, indeed, a woman who looms LARGE,
who rides not in a canoe, but on a BARGE!
I should share this rhyme with my itty-bitty wife,
as she bemoans 'fat' people, saying: "Get a life! "

Ok, she doesn't really quite say that, 'word for word';
if she did, I'd even more strongly think her absurd.

"Twin peaks" passed through my mind before, it, I read.
Perhaps yours I could zoom down, on toboggan or sled!


(August ….3rd …..2019)

Saturday, August 3, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: humorous,marriage
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Her list of PH poems is small, but getting BIGGER! ! !

bri

:)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 08 August 2019

I read Linda's hilarious poem Inequity in which she laughs at her own obesity. Of all lines and details, Bri is fascinated by the idea of climbing over the two mounds.....! Enjoyed your plan of zooming down the twin peaks on a sled. Very funny.... King of humour!

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Mj Lemon 07 August 2019

This is a work that taxes...a big talent! To myfavourites, Bri.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 August 2019

A wonderful poem for Linda Bella. I have just read her poem, Inequity, a well crafted write. Amazingly humorous , Bri. Very entertaining write.

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