Loss Poem by Tom Allport


Rating: 5.0

Ties that bind
Are not always good
When deception is discovered
Means loss of brotherhood.

Sunday, January 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
Rini Shibu 28 January 2018

Deception spoils relationships.. Good one

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 January 2018

Tom, such a well penned light verse👍👍👍

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Lodigiana 29 January 2018

You have a real talent for incisively getting to the point. Good work I like this very much!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 July 2022

A tremendous good philosophical poem in brevity.5 Stars TOP Score and myriad more!

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Susan Williams 06 February 2018

Deception- -it harms on so many levels. Having been deceived once, how do we know we weren't deceived twice? Ten times. A hundred. Perhaps the deception is about something that makes every day a lie and thus everything treasured is now trumpery. Excellent and important write, Tom.

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Bharati Nayak 04 February 2018

In any relationship, trust is very important.When trust is lost, ties break. A nice poem on human relationship, thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 February 2018

Loss of brotherhood provokes thought. Deception deeply affects relationships. This poem carries deep essence of perception of life. An amazing poem is wisely penned...10

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Unwritten Soul 03 February 2018

loss of brotherhood in because trust is breaking the bond, but is it a real loss or to keep other good things intact from disturbed..its better losing something that can make other things spoil. it is sad to remember after all you had but its good in other way round to keep you stronger from entering wrong lane!

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