Ties that bind
Are not always good
When deception is discovered
Means loss of brotherhood.
You have a real talent for incisively getting to the point. Good work I like this very much!
A tremendous good philosophical poem in brevity.5 Stars TOP Score and myriad more!
Deception- -it harms on so many levels. Having been deceived once, how do we know we weren't deceived twice? Ten times. A hundred. Perhaps the deception is about something that makes every day a lie and thus everything treasured is now trumpery. Excellent and important write, Tom.
In any relationship, trust is very important.When trust is lost, ties break. A nice poem on human relationship, thanks for sharing.
Loss of brotherhood provokes thought. Deception deeply affects relationships. This poem carries deep essence of perception of life. An amazing poem is wisely penned...10
loss of brotherhood in because trust is breaking the bond, but is it a real loss or to keep other good things intact from disturbed..its better losing something that can make other things spoil. it is sad to remember after all you had but its good in other way round to keep you stronger from entering wrong lane!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Deception spoils relationships.. Good one