Lost Poem by Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari

Lost

Rating: 5.0


When I asked her
A complicated question
Her scorching silence
Burnt me to ashes
I got mixed with the dust
Underneath her divine feet
She walked ahead
And I lost my identity
To my Motherland

Oct 29,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 October 2008

You're very patriotic Kamran and this piece reflects your divine patriotism to your Motherland.Brilliant expression! ! ! ! ! !

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Sathyanarayana M V S 29 October 2008

This is a great thought. U could have made it a bit clearer and cogent....still it is a great piece.

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 11 November 2008

This piece is enigmatic! For a poet's lamentations about his Lost identity under the burden of belonging, which quashes his very history! Heart rendering, a moment of tragedy repeated world over.

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Blue Horizon 09 November 2008

the question of self analysis, identity, an effort for realization, reason for my being...there r so many questions put forth in front of significance of this world, and human weaknesses. it's beautiful in fact it's beautifully confusing. a complete n true picture of compulsory human dilemma.

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Kesav Easwaran 02 November 2008

if speech is silver, silence is gold...both of you lost your indentities...in different ways, of course...open and concealed...same Mother land? good interesting write, Kamran...10

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Aijaz Asif 30 October 2008

short, beautifuland very deep write shah sahab....thanks fo sharing 10 for this wonderful work rgds asif

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Anjali Sinha 29 October 2008

the cinerary under your feet will show you the depth of her desires ---delve deep and pick up the shreds from the dust ++++++10 regards anju (do read mine YOUR BEAUTIFUL EYES)

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