Lost Poem by Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari

Lost

Rating: 5.0


When I asked her
A complicated question
Her scorching silence
Burnt me to ashes
I got mixed with the dust
Underneath her divine feet
She walked ahead
And I lost my identity
To my Motherland

Oct 29,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 29 October 2008

This is a great thought. U could have made it a bit clearer and cogent....still it is a great piece.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 October 2008

You're very patriotic Kamran and this piece reflects your divine patriotism to your Motherland.Brilliant expression! ! ! ! ! !

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 11 November 2008

This piece is enigmatic! For a poet's lamentations about his Lost identity under the burden of belonging, which quashes his very history! Heart rendering, a moment of tragedy repeated world over.

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Blue Horizon 09 November 2008

the question of self analysis, identity, an effort for realization, reason for my being...there r so many questions put forth in front of significance of this world, and human weaknesses. it's beautiful in fact it's beautifully confusing. a complete n true picture of compulsory human dilemma.

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Kesav Easwaran 02 November 2008

if speech is silver, silence is gold...both of you lost your indentities...in different ways, of course...open and concealed...same Mother land? good interesting write, Kamran...10

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Aijaz Asif 30 October 2008

short, beautifuland very deep write shah sahab....thanks fo sharing 10 for this wonderful work rgds asif

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Anjali Sinha 29 October 2008

the cinerary under your feet will show you the depth of her desires ---delve deep and pick up the shreds from the dust ++++++10 regards anju (do read mine YOUR BEAUTIFUL EYES)

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