Neon lights, pubs and malls,
bewildered small town girl
slips out- where night sky...
a lovely haiku on the city lights that astonish the small town girl.
the heat and cold...of these two lights...the village girl feels at home with th sky
sudden astonishment on merry and alive styles. Well poem written being Japanese style.
Wow, the title was immediately captured by my eye, and the content is a perfect haiku.Thanks for sharing, Mamta. With best wishes, Yelena.
Wow! Splendid…and exquisite Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
very nice Haiku indeed. colorful and bright. take care see my new poems of 2010 on pg1
Beautiful...crisp & hit point blank. We lose all senses amidst these invading artificial lights. Loved it Ma'am, Ranjit.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I think, in the present scenario everyone feels like her (secretly or openly) . How life startles one at every step is stunning!