! ! ! ! Lost In City Lights- Haiku! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! Lost In City Lights- Haiku! ! ! !

Rating: 3.1


Neon lights, pubs and malls,
bewildered small town girl
slips out- where night sky...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 31 July 2009

I think, in the present scenario everyone feels like her (secretly or openly) . How life startles one at every step is stunning!

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Raj Arumugam 03 July 2009

nothing cities can offer beat the beauty and purity of the sky

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Obinna Eruchie 23 May 2009

a lovely haiku on the city lights that astonish the small town girl.

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the heat and cold...of these two lights...the village girl feels at home with th sky

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Hari Khabrani 21 March 2009

sudden astonishment on merry and alive styles. Well poem written being Japanese style.

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Allemagne Roßmann 02 September 2011

Very powerful in brevity of words...

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Yelena M. 03 June 2010

Wow, the title was immediately captured by my eye, and the content is a perfect haiku.Thanks for sharing, Mamta. With best wishes, Yelena.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 08 April 2010

Wow! Splendid…and exquisite Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Seema Chowdhury 09 March 2010

very nice Haiku indeed. colorful and bright. take care see my new poems of 2010 on pg1

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Ranjit Ravindran 07 November 2009

Beautiful...crisp & hit point blank. We lose all senses amidst these invading artificial lights. Loved it Ma'am, Ranjit.

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