Lost Love Poem by Jahan Zeb

Lost Love

Rating: 5.0


Less pain is goodbye
Breaks the heart when cry
In times she stands
Holding both your hands
Gazing at red rose
In a garden close
Takes you out of room
Pleads to pluck the bloom
I plucked, gave it to her
She took and ran
With a kiss on my cheek
Returned some hours later
Hugged me tight
With all her might
Laughed and smiled
Spoke of her love
But my heart cried
Her head on my shoulder
Thoughts elsewhere
Someone else
With me she celebrated
HER LOST LOVE REGAINED

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetheart Morgan 16 November 2012

Sad or happy? ? ? You can be the real love so she wants celebrate with you your back. Simple like that! ! ! ! As i say, love has not rules! ! !

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Persian Khushi 20 November 2012

Excellently written! beautifully brought message accross.

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David Threadgold 18 November 2012

A very well written poem with a strong romantic message. well done a pleasure to read.

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Payal Parande 16 November 2012

a little sad, but splendidly expressed sir..........

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Stevie Taite 16 November 2012

Oh there is nothing worse than when you are in love with some one and they think of you only as a friend. Then proceed to tell you all of their ups and downs in love! This little dilemma well captures here!

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Unwritten Soul 16 November 2012

Lyrical writing, it's like a movie scene hahahaha nice and you done it with a good surprise..keep it up! _Soul

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Malakand Pakistan
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