...^^lost Souls^^.... Poem by wardha jawdat

...^^lost Souls^^....

Rating: 3.1


The past peers at me
Through the brittle glass of every window
Strange sensations curl themselves
Up against my insides
I recognize your accusing face
The hurt, the bitterness
And I feel the old pain
That reminds me
Of the heart that I thought I had long stoned

Suddenly every window becomes a mirror
Which reflects you back to me
Your love
Your faith
Your loyalty
Your sacrifices
Your virtues
…..
I turn away from this vista
This sad parade of my life
And pass a real mirror
Which yells, ' infidel! '
And I arrest my step
Cant seem to run away from it
Though i've had enough time to try
I see me in all my splendid
Ugliness
All my splendid
Deceit
All my splendid
Deviltry
And I know you couldn’t have saved me
Even though you did try

…………………….
I am of those lost souls
Who lose home
even though
They see within reach
The white picket fence
And the pretty red wooden door.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Existential Despair 19 September 2008

A very capturing read...Lovely poem indeed!

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I stopped at four different lines convinced that this is where it has peaked to an excellence but I had to go on and realized that its magnificent all the way

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Roland Bastien 21 July 2009

Very lyrical - self pity - -- The past peers at me Through the brittle glass of every window Strange sensations curl themselves Up against my insides --- Good vision-

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 October 2008

Very passionate writing.....10

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Waqas Naeem 03 October 2008

excellent imagery...most vivid and full of forceful emotions...and what a splendid last few lines...excellent poem!

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Ershad Mazumder 25 September 2008

Excellant job. Wonderfull theme.

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Reshma Ramesh 25 September 2008

beautiful.................

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