Love Poem by salu salu

Love

Rating: 5.0


Love is told manifold
and many are fooled.

(She) Stepped into the street and
dropped a star when blink
Followed a crowd squeaking
Pearls fallen in r smile
smashed hearts of love at carts
Smirked at the other side of lips
Sleeves up and laughs up her sleeves
Paced in a catwalk
Placed footprints in vivid
Enthused mob traced through the heels
So mass in procession treaded fast
Fasten belt and Spellbound
Waited long at doorstep.


Love in masquerade
Back at greenroom
Unfastens her mask
Laughs up her sleeves
Costumes peeled off
Paled profile reflected age
That laughed at her in ease
And she peeped at them in amuse.

-------salu----.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Pandey 11 March 2009

this is such a beautiful piece of work...great..10

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Mehmet YILMAZLAR 01 February 2009

nice to read it.best regards

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premji premji 27 January 2009

funny.......but truthful to the core............

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 11 January 2009

Various faces, features and modes of love.....Beautifully narrated......10/10.

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Ency Bearis 01 January 2009

well narrated verses..amusing..

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excellent poem..enjoyed your way of writing..

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Beauty Philosophy 28 September 2009

A wonderful and truthful poem...

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

Pearls fallen in r smile smashed hearts of love at carts Rachel Ann Butler

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 23 April 2009

this is a work of art..truly wonderful

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Ratnakar Rout 11 April 2009

Hi! Salu, A good poem.I enjoyed reading.Thanks.

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