If love is sun,
its power,
penetration ability
of its radiations
are beyond man's estimation.
If moon,
it is a good companion,
its coolness and beauty
can not be compared
with any one.
If sky,
its vastness
can't be measured.
If ocean,
its depth
can't be fathomed.
If weapon,
its winning ability
is out of imagination,
the true conqueror
universal cosmopolitan.
If sweet words and good deeds,
it would create wonderful
inter-personal contact,
effect is eternal, unlimited.
If flower,
it sends its fragrance
in all directions,
gives aesthetic pleasure,
don't pick it off,
water the plant,
let it bear fruits and seeds,
seeds of love to be
always sown.
If friend,
add to it,
it would increase
in arithmetic progression,
its antonym is enemy,
subtract it,
love becomes dominant.
If joy,
multiply it,
would increase
in geometric progression,
divide, share with all,
it would be doubled.
Its antonym is grief,
divide, share with all,
it would be halved.
Love, therefore,
be the basis of
all our thoughts and actions,
to rid the world of
most of the ills.
A profound poem that expresses in details the wonders, beauty and magnificent attributes of love. I concur with your ultimate stanza. Brilliantly written. To my Poem List.
Let me put spotlight on the substantial aspects of your poem: 'If flower, it sends its fragrance in all directions, gives aesthetic pleasure, don't pick it off, water the plant, let it bear fruits and seeds, seeds of love to be always sown'.....a precious poem. Top score!
Love in us is the only thing that can smoothen our heart and make the world a peaceful place to live in. LOVE is the main thing in our thoughts and actions. God is utmost Love, followers of God do their best to make this world a better safer and more peaceful place to live upon.
(D) Excellent choice of words, fascinating under a magnifying glass, my appreciation for you has been expressed in greatness, Dr. Dash, but every word is really meant, allow me to say: you are a huge asset in PH in vocabulary rendering. I love that very much!
My mind is full of respect and gratitude to you Mam.I can not forget when you addressed jaihind in my first poem.How ever you are an expert in so many languages.I am really proud of u and Mam Rose Marie along with all others.
(C) To my Favourites and 5 Stars Full Score/ TOP Score and myriad more. The theme of Love brilliantly put in a special light.
(B) God is utmost Love, followers of God do their best to make this world a better safer and more peaceful place to live in. LOVE for mankind/ individues is for me the highest. Since God IS Love.
( A) Love in us is the only thing that can smoothen our heart and make the world a peaceful place to live in. LOVE is the main important thing in our thoughts and actions.
5 Stars Full Score and myriad more! I constantly enjoyed your deep philosophy of life so brilliantly worded, Dr. Dash.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Another wonderful poem from a great pen. Very encompassing and discerning write on love.