hopeless 111

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Love And Suffer - Poem by hopeless 111

never try to be shy
when you look at the sky
just trust yourself
and yourlife will begin
try to say what you fear to feel
oneday you will be here
yelling to be seen
but there wont be scene
no time to fear
run and get what you need
but i know what you feel
you will let me suffer
sleep and awake as alover
i tried to end my lover
if you let me suffer
i have NO CHOICE TO LEAVE


Comments about Love And Suffer by hopeless 111

  • (8/27/2009 9:56:00 AM)


    simple, nice and expressive words....Good work friend...and the title is so nice as well...good work :) (Report) Reply

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  • (7/31/2009 7:19:00 AM)


    when we love someone so much we suffer so much
    nice words
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  • (1/18/2009 11:44:00 AM)


    gr8 work dear..
    i luv it, , <3
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  • (10/15/2008 3:42:00 AM)


    the monologue is a great improvement
    I liked the poem
    good work
    (Report) Reply

  • (3/28/2008 1:39:00 PM)


    i felt pain in your words when i read this poem of yours
    thanks for sharing
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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 28, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, March 28, 2008


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