Love And Suffer Poem by hopeless 111

Love And Suffer

Rating: 5.0


never try to be shy
when you look at the sky
just trust yourself
and yourlife will begin
try to say what you fear to feel
oneday you will be here
yelling to be seen
but there wont be scene
no time to fear
run and get what you need
but i know what you feel
you will let me suffer
sleep and awake as alover
i tried to end my lover
if you let me suffer
i have NO CHOICE TO LEAVE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doha Ewiess 27 August 2009

simple, nice and expressive words....Good work friend...and the title is so nice as well...good work :)

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Lola Hi 31 July 2009

when we love someone so much we suffer so much nice words

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Dark Gurl 55 18 January 2009

gr8 work dear.. i luv it, , <3

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Yasser Koor 15 October 2008

the monologue is a great improvement I liked the poem good work

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Anong All 28 March 2008

i felt pain in your words when i read this poem of yours thanks for sharing

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