Love And Virus Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Love And Virus

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They say love is pure like 24 carat gold
It can easily be deformed and lose its grip
To accommodate beloved by mending self


Love is unblemish like fireflies
Which submerges in fire as it flies
In the darkest of the nights without lights.

Love is an untamed force like tides and waves
The more we try to concur, it bounces back
With a force to test our courage and determination

But why does love quarantine the person after heartbreak?
Why simple virus of jealousy, obsessiveness attacks it?
Why love is so vulnerable to destroy self within the self?

Monday, September 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by after reading poem "Virus" by Dr Suresh Kumar.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zoyza Da Vinka 15 September 2020

Excellent poem nicely composed.

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Varsha M 14 September 2020

This is really explicit. Very well conceived perfectly articulated and marked with signature question why? To understand why one need to dive in the ocean again with darks and whales. Beautiful poetry.

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Poetic Sky 14 September 2020

Pertinent questions. I m sure this will have no answers.

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Deepak S S 15 September 2020

You poems on love are something to ponder on. Yet another fantastic poem.

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Darren Jkoeryo 15 September 2020

Wonderful poem by love poet master. Hats off to you Sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2020

Definition of love is fantastically inscribed in different ways and the incoming of jealousy in love as virus is touchingly delineated. A great philosophical poem is amazingly shared. Thanks.

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Zuzu Mutairi 15 September 2020

Where there is a love there is jealousy and complacency.

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Sharad Bhatia 15 September 2020

Good morning sir, A pure magnificat poem about " love and virus" . Thank you so much for sharing such a beautiful poem. 1000++

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Poetic Sky 15 September 2020

Love is something we all explore in our own ways.

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Kostas Lagos 15 September 2020

All beauty is delicate.It's like wine!

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