Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 284 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

Love At Fifty Five - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

When I tell you
Love at fifty five,
I hear you chuckle;
I see you smile

I hear you say
With penchant eyes,
What a way
To go astray!

Listen! My mate!
To what I say
My love has age,
Years twenty five!

Young to behold
And young in mind
It won’t grey old
A million days!

None can quench
The ocean’s thirst!
The sky can hold
All this abundant light!

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Comments about Love At Fifty Five by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • (5/7/2010 2:32:00 PM)


    Your poetry reminds me of Swami Vivekananda’s disciple Tan Ten {Josephine Macleod] when asked about age she used to tell 2/3 years…Lo! She was young but how can be 2/3 years?

    She replied that she counts her age from first meeting with Swami-ji is equal to 2nd birth [spiritual]

    Love decreases age...but mind it age is but just a stupid number …has nothing to do with Love’s shelf life of lovers...lolol ...greater the intensity of love no matter what is the MFD and has no ED
    Voted 10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    MFD = Manufacturing date
    ED = Expiry date
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  • (9/20/2009 2:27:00 AM)


    None can quench
    The ocean’s thirst!
    The sky can hold
    All this abundant light!


    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • (8/22/2009 5:45:00 AM)


    Yes..
    As you told..I smiled
    But not the one which you said
    but with utost love that still you have a youthful heart to love
    behold it till death
    It will make you young day after day
    very good poem
    regards
    sandhya
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  • (7/9/2009 9:37:00 AM)


    I think this is incorrigibly sweet and I agree completely. Funny how age becomes like
    this extra aspect of our persons that is always a threat to make us look ridiculous somehow.
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  • Indira Renganathan (3/24/2009 10:23:00 AM)


    You are permitted to change your age younger....what else then (Report) Reply

  • (3/18/2009 10:51:00 AM)


    This poem made me smile from ear to ear and most likely will continue to do so from year to year! (Report) Reply

  • (2/10/2009 6:26:00 AM)


    Believe me, love only gets better! Love at sixty-three is pretty good - but not with a partner of twenty five, thank you! I do like to be able to talk to my lover on equal terms! Anyway, your poem flows along nicely! (Report) Reply

  • (1/25/2009 8:08:00 PM)


    love is a feeling which keeps you younger...lovely..10 (Report) Reply

  • (1/1/2009 5:55:00 PM)


    this poem s a lovely piece from a loving person, , , i like ths, , it makes me young, , (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2008 1:16:00 AM)


    I agree with this... NO matter how old we are, IT matters how OLD we are in our hearts! ! Youth can only be measured by the amount of happiness and joy we posses, not by age........

    Bonnie
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  • (11/21/2008 7:21:00 AM)


    Love can be blended wth any age... I really liked this piece of work..... (Report) Reply

  • (11/20/2008 5:08:00 AM)


    wonderful....: >, , , , .....: >....u brought a smile to my face kesav jee...this was so marvellous. (Report) Reply

  • (11/13/2008 6:58:00 PM)


    Ahh the wisdom one would have in love at a mature age. I think this is a wonderful piece. Very well written (Report) Reply

  • (11/12/2008 8:33:00 AM)


    I was looking into your poetry files & discovered this one which sings the poet's song, describes the pathos of his heart & nudges the mind of all the readers especially the mine. saved into my favourite closet. thanks for sharing this sacred feeling. (Report) Reply

  • (11/7/2008 11:58:00 PM)


    LOVE AT FIFTY FIVE...LOVE IS BEYOND THE BOUNDARIES OF AGE OR RELIGION OR SUCH IMMORTAL ENTITIES...

    ITS WRITTEN WITH INNOCENCE AND PURITY OF THOUGHTS...

    :)
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  • (9/24/2008 4:11:00 PM)


    Its wonderful how u write poems with profound meaning in such simple words....thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/13/2008 4:08:00 AM)


    A nice optimistic attitude is there. I love it. But if love is something metaphisical...Beyond all, I love it. (Report) Reply

  • (7/26/2008 5:34:00 AM)


    Like wine love matures with age,
    Young love can leave such a bitter taste,
    Learning to love the moment and not waste,
    Love is better with such a sweet taste... Andrew 10
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  • Palas Kumar Ray (7/24/2008 6:03:00 AM)


    Love matured has got to be sweeter than Raw, I taste only the half matured.
    Tasty and committed poem.
    I wonder how someone might have reacted on this poem.

    NO MARKS.
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  • (6/17/2008 3:51:00 AM)


    Divine and genuine love transcends age and sex, power and position! A nice poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 1, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 5, 2008


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