Love Delirium Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Love Delirium

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Joyously we kiss beneath the felicitous blue sky,
And then inside we follow the sensual aroma from scented candles
Drifting from an amorous room; the delicious taste of summer peaches
And slow musical dances create perfect situations for erotic embraces;
I’m alienated today from my formerly dark meditations,
My head is dreamily swimming like an Olympic athlete
Into pools of happiness and warm feminine flesh,
I confess an amazing lust extending from Helen of Troy
To every girl I ever saw as a small school boy,
And the moonlight is a sly conspirator
Falling softly into the eyes I kiss and miss when they depart
With my fragile heart still serenading them
With inarticulate palpitations of desire and love sensations;
When you’re with me next, I’ll unlatch the sexy ankle straps
To your adorable shoes freeing your gorgeous feet
And a magical breathtaking affair will commence.

Friday, August 12, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: kiss,lust,swimming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marcy Jarvis 15 November 2005

there's not a woman on earth who is going to be thinking about any adjective-noun structure when she's reading this, Jeff.

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Max Reif 19 August 2005

I especially like the middle part of this poem, Helen of Troy, the schoolgirls, the moon...

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Raynette Eitel 12 August 2005

Well Uriah, lust is often a cliche...eroticism is as well...but sometimes just the right picture calls for such phrases. What makes this different and gave me pause for thought is the illusion that all the lust felt from Helen of Troy on are directed at girls you meet. Wow! I like the poem, especially the ending. Raynette

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Mary Nagy 12 August 2005

Wow, such a beautifully 'moving' piece Uriah. Your latest works are truly wonderful. Great job, whatever's (or whoever's) been inspiring such lovely poems, keep it up. Sincerely, Mary

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 12 August 2005

This is nice, Uriah. I have to agree with Mahnaz...you have written a sensual 'piece'. LSP

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