Love denied
Is a death sentence
Or a gangland drive-by,
And everyday
I feel like
The ghost
Of an execution.
Now hang in there Uriah and keep your head. Very good write indeed. Most enjoyable read. Love Ernestine XXX
Hurt shines out in this succinct expressive piece. Superb.
Uriah, This made me cry. Very beautiful and sad. Shannon xoxo
I loved this.. simple, poignant, not a single word wasted and the ghost metaphor is spot on.. I could not put it better. exceptional write! HBH
oh dear Uriah... I feel your pain... big hugs! Very powerful words. -Eila
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Powerful poem Uriah........to have love denied does seem like the worst fate imaginable. I'm still rooting for ya! Sincerely, Mary