Is a death sentence
Or a gangland drive-by,
I feel like
Of an execution.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
this is fabulous. absolutely.
Hurt shines out in this succinct expressive piece. Superb.
This made me cry. Very beautiful and sad.
I loved this.. simple, poignant, not a single word wasted and the ghost metaphor is spot on.. I could not put it better. exceptional write!
oh dear Uriah... I feel your pain... big hugs! Very powerful words.
Now hang in there Uriah and keep your head. Very good write indeed. Most enjoyable read. Love Ernestine XXX
Powerful poem Uriah........to have love denied does seem like the worst fate imaginable. I'm still rooting for ya! Sincerely, Mary
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