Thursday, March 2, 2006

Love Denied Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love denied
Is a death sentence
Or a gangland drive-by,
And everyday
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Uriah Hamilton
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Goldy Locks 02 September 2006

this is fabulous. absolutely.

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Hurt shines out in this succinct expressive piece. Superb.

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Shannon Chapel 05 March 2006

Uriah, This made me cry. Very beautiful and sad. Shannon xoxo

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Ivy Christou 02 March 2006

I loved this.. simple, poignant, not a single word wasted and the ghost metaphor is spot on.. I could not put it better. exceptional write! HBH

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 02 March 2006

oh dear Uriah... I feel your pain... big hugs! Very powerful words. -Eila

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Ernestine Northover 02 March 2006

Now hang in there Uriah and keep your head. Very good write indeed. Most enjoyable read. Love Ernestine XXX

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Mary Nagy 02 March 2006

Powerful poem Uriah........to have love denied does seem like the worst fate imaginable. I'm still rooting for ya! Sincerely, Mary

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