Love denied
Is a death sentence
Or a gangland drive-by,
And everyday
...
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Hurt shines out in this succinct expressive piece. Superb.
Uriah, This made me cry. Very beautiful and sad. Shannon xoxo
I loved this.. simple, poignant, not a single word wasted and the ghost metaphor is spot on.. I could not put it better. exceptional write! HBH
oh dear Uriah... I feel your pain... big hugs! Very powerful words. -Eila
Now hang in there Uriah and keep your head. Very good write indeed. Most enjoyable read. Love Ernestine XXX
Powerful poem Uriah........to have love denied does seem like the worst fate imaginable. I'm still rooting for ya! Sincerely, Mary
this is fabulous. absolutely.