Love Departed

They uttered in chorus Great! Great! But the final test to win was already set Plucking away my root was only their trial Implanting New Belief was their word final.....swam with the tides a bit far..... plucking my root away. never look back. love this poem. love, experiences....... decisions..... thank you very much dear poetess. tony

'Hearing that terrific crime I was taken aback Inner voice cautioned me never look back! ' Such a nice finale to a well crafted poem.. Thank you :)

Love departed! ! But, there is much hope in life. Nice work.

Very nice penning, in fact true love is always threatened, it is envied mostly.

if love departs it has grown cold. nice write

A note by the poet may clear the confusion.

awesome... loved it....

dat's true, there r always black hands to tear apart lovers. but d way ur fought was grt.... nice rhyming set...

An interesting poem dear friend, I try to read it again and again, am not very sure to understand the end. To me it sounded like such a happy time you had with your loved one than others came admired you and wanted to add beside that sweet love, something that made you run and cry.. I seem to feel quite strange the lines: They uttered in chorus Great! Great! But the final test to win was already set Plucking away my root was only their trial Implanting New Belief was their word final to me, sounds like a scene the from a tv studio..it does let you think that you have the chance of a choice, than takes from you with the both hands..

This may be an earlier poem, but I feel it is wanting to expand more. The flow is fine, but I am sure there is more expression for what is a hard subject. Good work though.