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Love Departed

Rating: 4.7
Freshness of love made me lively
To give up the life of solitude boldly
Year after year we loved happily
Hand in hand ever walked closely

Shockingly arose a whirlpool of strangers
Who wished to measure the worth of lovers.
I spiritedly climbed the hill in a second
And swam with the tides to far beyond

They uttered in chorus Great! Great!
But the final test to win was already set
Plucking away my root was only their trial
Implanting New Belief was their word final

Hearing that terrific crime I was taken aback
Inner voice cautioned me never look back!
Sunday, March 6, 2011
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Dr Antony Theodore 25 May 2016
They uttered in chorus Great! Great! But the final test to win was already set Plucking away my root was only their trial Implanting New Belief was their word final.....swam with the tides a bit far..... plucking my root away. never look back. love this poem. love, experiences....... decisions..... thank you very much dear poetess. tony
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Souren Mondal 09 February 2016
'Hearing that terrific crime I was taken aback Inner voice cautioned me never look back! ' Such a nice finale to a well crafted poem.. Thank you :)
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Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2016
Love departed! ! But, there is much hope in life. Nice work.
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Amitava Sur 22 March 2015
Very nice penning, in fact true love is always threatened, it is envied mostly.
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Heather Wilkins 21 July 2013
if love departs it has grown cold. nice write
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Khairul Ahsan 17 July 2013
A note by the poet may clear the confusion.
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Priya Gupta 13 January 2012
awesome... loved it....
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Neetha Sasidharan 31 December 2011
dat's true, there r always black hands to tear apart lovers. but d way ur fought was grt.... nice rhyming set...
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Elena Sandu 12 September 2011
An interesting poem dear friend, I try to read it again and again, am not very sure to understand the end. To me it sounded like such a happy time you had with your loved one than others came admired you and wanted to add beside that sweet love, something that made you run and cry.. I seem to feel quite strange the lines: They uttered in chorus Great! Great! But the final test to win was already set Plucking away my root was only their trial Implanting New Belief was their word final to me, sounds like a scene the from a tv studio..it does let you think that you have the chance of a choice, than takes from you with the both hands..
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Louis Cecile 18 July 2011
This may be an earlier poem, but I feel it is wanting to expand more. The flow is fine, but I am sure there is more expression for what is a hard subject. Good work though.
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