Sadness brings no positive glory,
But it's there, all the same,
When love is no longer the story,
You even forget your name.
Truth is beauty, and so is your poem, for it is faithfully true to truth. Though a sad poem, it might bring tears and smile together, particularly the lines: When love is no longer the story, You even forget your name. Cheers, my friend! 10/10.
Very touching and expressing very strong negative sentiments. However, one should not forget that a dawn of hope always follows the darkness of night. As a poem it is beautiful.10 points.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love, in the regard of romantic relationships, takes too much of a toll when in trial. What a shame that chemicals in the brain dictate sadness despite our desire to be happy