shakil ahmed

Gold Star - 16,980 Points (31-01-1969 / Badarpur, Assam, India.)

Love, I Want - Poem by shakil ahmed

The girl who has lost in wilderness
I do not have her company.
The girl who is a nightingale
I do not have her symphony.
The girl who is a dazzling beauty
I do not have her pity.
The girl who has oozing grace and youth
I have not enjoyed both.
The girl who has dark and deep eyes
I do not have its amorous sighs.
The girl who always wears a lovely smile,
The girl who follows a different style,
I am anxious to get her favour,
I want to be her one and only lover.
The girl who is callous and ruthless,
She offers and I get severe pain.
The girl who is wanton and betrayer,
She offers love and I cannot share.
Love does not come the way I want,
Rather it comes and gives heart-burnt.

Comments about Love, I Want by shakil ahmed

  • Kewayne Wadley (12/4/2015 11:04:00 AM)

    Beautifully articulated!
    Deep longing pictured well.
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  • Gajanan Mishra (11/18/2015 5:21:00 AM)

    Nothing but love, I want, that suffice the purpose of life.. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2015 6:44:00 PM)

    nice poem...10

    Just share
    where you seem and feel fair
    the human beings are same everywhere
    so keep no fear
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  • Sahra Hussein (10/20/2014 11:14:00 AM)

    You can close your eyes what you don't want to see but you can't close your heart what you don't want to feel.
    love is lucky
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  • (11/17/2009 7:34:00 AM)

    don't get disappointed. life will certainly give you a chance to fall in love with your dream girl.
    good luck.
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  • (11/17/2009 1:41:00 AM)

    love is a dangerous game indeed

    well written
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  • Ramesh T A (11/16/2009 2:20:00 PM)

    A different kind of love is interesting to read! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 14, 2011

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