Love Is Deep Poem by Luo Zhihai

Love Is Deep

Rating: 5.0


Love Is Deep

You make up late at night
the moon moves plum shadow on the window
You dress up in the morning
before the mirror with a lotus pattern on the frame
the rosy clouds dyes your charming bun-type hairdo

Flowers and grasses
swallows and warblers
the spring is in romance
Dusk and dawn
you and I
our dreams are continuous

Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
The 11,319th Two Pairs of Couplets,1/27/2021


情深深

深夜梳妆,月移梅影窗台上
清晨打扮,霞染娇鬟菱镜边
花花草草,燕燕莺莺春浪漫
暮暮朝朝,卿卿我我梦连绵

格律体新诗 ● 十一绝罗志海著译
第11319首对联体诗 2021年1月27日

Wednesday, January 27, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: love,deep,flower,grass,bird,you,dawn,dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 27 January 2021

The spring is in romance, so most beautifully said! A 5 Stars poem! Sublimest Eleven Words Of Qutrain. To my Favourites. Thank you so much for sharing, Luo Sir

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Luis Estable 27 January 2021

It is confusing to see in this where to take a breath. The lines are a continuous same. The zero punctuation makes it hard to see where a line ends and another commences.

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Luo Zhihai

Luo Zhihai

Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China
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