poet Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

**** Love Letter

Darling oh Darling
Embraces this writing
Letter of better
Cannon of greater
Bombarding you withiest
Splinters of kisses
Dances of jittery
Camped with animosity
No love triumphs
But the hearts prime
Sings to my ears
Drowns me with tears

Darling
What a joke when I drink
I taste your lemon touch
What a freak when I eat
I crunch your blueberry eyes
What a nag when I sleep
I dream of your strawberry smiles
Fruit juices are everywhere
You are my fruits
Evidence just wouldn’t be enough
Our terrains of love are ploughed


Darling
The phantom of Juliet haunting
Romeo’s gravely posture
Unease the mystery within
The soils and gravel moisturized
With tears of silhouette paradise
Don’t tell me of your parent’s anguish
Should we lavishly skirmish?
Knowing something is amiss
Letting our desires rest in peace
Freaking nights full of horror’s fright
Could not change our plights
Darling
Elope with me to heaven
Earth unsafe the heat would get us burnt
The rising mercury pauses
Our hearts abetting losses
Love trembles to death
The Angels wait
Clock is ticking to our senses
Hinting the peculiar madness
Another option is tragedy
What is the pedigree?
To marry you out of wedlock and flee
Is like dead but not death

Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 8, 2008
Poem Edited: Monday, February 2, 2009

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Comments about **** Love Letter by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • Naidz Ladia (1/7/2009 9:54:00 PM)

    waittt, , i hve a corrction on ths...its not for every generations..coz others r using sms to send ths kisses, , , ooowwww whatta social world..

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  • Naidz Ladia (1/7/2009 9:52:00 PM)

    a love letter for all generations? maybe, , , its for our generations....
    but when we gage ths as poem, ths s excellent hon from u..am a late comer here so here i am, , , hehehhe came late...
    a very beautiful piece, , , my gosh, i dont want to put flowering wrds on ths, , u mght think i lied..
    ths s EXCELLENT...SUPERB..HONORED..no one hits u hon, believe me..

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  • Albert Fernandez (1/7/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    oh my my gosh i love it! it mives me butterflies! !

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  • Sebastine HumaemoSebastine Humaemo (12/13/2008 12:06:00 AM)

    pleasant love letter for a loved one...hmmm....cute...

    'What a nag when I sleep
    I dream of your strawberry smiles '....best lines...

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  • Adriana Veloso (12/5/2008 2:59:00 PM)

    To be honest
    I think that you have best poems
    but this one is good too

    bye have a good night

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  • Minal Sharma (11/25/2008 7:22:00 AM)

    I LIKED VERY MUCH....................

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  • Li Away (11/22/2008 1:40:00 PM)

    nicely pinned


    this love letter

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  • Maria Sudibyo (11/21/2008 9:15:00 PM)

    it will make my cheek blushed if i got this love letter. oh, do you eat 'love letter' too?

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  • Jeffrey Omarino (11/19/2008 5:36:00 PM)

    so well written nice one: -)

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  • Muriel Emerson (11/17/2008 2:02:00 PM)

    nice poem i like it a lot its a 10

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  • Ahmad ShiddiqiAhmad Shiddiqi (11/16/2008 1:38:00 PM)

    very well done! keep writing!

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  • Dolan Doran (11/16/2008 7:23:00 AM)

    a definate 10...i love the end, the 'Elope' verses....amazing. astounding metaphors. the whole poem quite literally touches the heart. love it!

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  • Sucheta Tiwari (11/15/2008 10:57:00 PM)

    it gets extremely captivating 'the phantom..' onwards...
    a 10! !

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  • Hershe Moore (11/12/2008 10:59:00 PM)

    beautifully translated...your words flow eloquently and soften the heart

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (11/12/2008 6:10:00 AM)

    your love poems are excelling one another, Sulaiman...good write...10

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  • Fading Heart (11/12/2008 12:30:00 AM)

    Your words say
    dear things about your love
    this girl must be very lucky
    You wrote such a beatiful poem and
    still you were able to rhyme
    great work

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  • Saskia Harjono (11/12/2008 12:05:00 AM)

    Splendid! What a great piece of poem! Anyway, what couldn't one do in the name of love! :)

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  • Mike Farris Jr. (11/11/2008 9:31:00 PM)

    Great poem! Keep up the writing.

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  • Dawn Rodgers (11/11/2008 11:42:00 AM)

    your girl is lucky and I hope that you two are able to be together.
    much respect
    dawn

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  • Sherif MonemSherif Monem (11/11/2008 10:00:00 AM)

    Very romantic poem with fresh ideas.

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