poet Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

**** Love Bloodbath ***

Bang! Bang! And the head splits open
Like a work of Art
Mushroom pie painted in red
Human form has transformed into mincemeats
The lethargy of weakened love drumming
The urges to end creation
To end lives
A tragic you’d say
A conflict we’d delay
Shall not thou betrayal
My Royal loyal
Would shy away
From astray
“This is lunation”
Once the Lake Toba
Singing in joy and its juiciness
Wetting our paranormal unisons
The moon smiling on us
Couldn’t get enough of our melodrama
Our hearts pierced into one!
Our dreams winged into want
“What could have behold us”
Lies between another loves
All those sweetened lyrical words of yours
Enflamed the coldness beneath me
Ooooo honey and ooooooo baby
Leads to history’s tragedy
Crime scene a landmark
The dark Taj Mahal
Headlines the hallmark
Of once sweet little gal

Poem Submitted: Monday, September 8, 2008
Poem Edited: Thursday, February 26, 2009

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  • Elike Ikechukwu (10/27/2008 1:38:00 AM)

    Quite revolutionary, with good imagery. Just hoping that some day our hearts could peirce into one. You did a good very work.

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  • Maxislam Beauty (10/6/2008 10:03:00 AM)

    Love is all better than all whilst many conjecture on love and timing.Great Job.

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  • Cheung Shun Sang (9/22/2008 1:52:00 AM)

    I know that you love lives and peace-ok

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (9/21/2008 9:07:00 AM)

    interesting poem of unique style, life by the tragedies in the nichie of social millieu, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing

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  • P K (9/19/2008 10:48:00 PM)

    a good one! ! ! .....nice poem! ! ! : -)

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  • Warsan Omer (9/19/2008 5:47:00 PM)

    Thats a really nice poem i like it read some of mines some time

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  • Lava P (9/19/2008 7:47:00 AM)

    10 for dis touching twist=============

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  • Gone with the wind (9/19/2008 1:00:00 AM)

    An outstanding write. Really touched my heart. Love Gul

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  • Rose Rosado (9/18/2008 7:11:00 PM)

    What a great poem! Its really great - 10!

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  • Qendresa Ulaj (9/18/2008 12:03:00 PM)

    great poem you wrote here... congrats... i give u a ten

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  • Modi . (9/18/2008 2:01:00 AM)

    Your work really moved me by its darkness, depth and drama, thank you for asking me to read it.

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  • Aijaz Asif (9/17/2008 12:05:00 PM)

    wow now thats dark, an extremely beautiful poem the one i like most, a great write sulaiman bhai....thanks

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  • Elena ToledoElena Toledo (9/17/2008 6:52:00 AM)

    A very deep poem..Awesome work! ! !

    I would love for you to read me too my freind Sul

    blessings

    Elena

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  • Tj Becker (9/16/2008 10:52:00 AM)

    This was full of dark seeded emotions. Very descriptive although a horrible scene, you painted it well with your pen. It read as a story in poetry style. A good write

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  • Kimberley Lim (9/16/2008 8:57:00 AM)

    A interesting pom, of anger and pain. Great expressions, through simple words. (: Keep striving.

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  • Dare Ola (9/15/2008 10:59:00 AM)

    A tragedy you'll say line 8.
    The poem is ok.

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  • Jennifer Smith (9/15/2008 8:19:00 AM)

    I like this poem.
    It is very deep and grasps a pain inside when reading it.
    good job.

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  • Some Poems (9/15/2008 6:55:00 AM)

    An interesting poem. It certainly grips you despite the curious manner in which it was written.

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  • angelianne 1012 (9/15/2008 3:26:00 AM)

    u cant really expect anything less from mr. sulaiman....this is an awesome poem...the emotion and the words are superb...really awesome....10+...

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  • Robert L Bixler III (9/14/2008 1:06:00 PM)

    Very powerful poem, Sulaiman... I love the raw emotion and imagery you use in this poem.

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