**** Love Letter Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

**** Love Letter

Rating: 4.4


Darling oh Darling
Embraces this writing
Letter of better
Cannon of greater
Bombarding you withiest
Splinters of kisses
Dances of jittery
Camped with animosity
No love triumphs
But the hearts prime
Sings to my ears
Drowns me with tears

Darling
What a joke when I drink
I taste your lemon touch
What a freak when I eat
I crunch your blueberry eyes
What a nag when I sleep
I dream of your strawberry smiles
Fruit juices are everywhere
You are my fruits
Evidence just wouldn’t be enough
Our terrains of love are ploughed


Darling
The phantom of Juliet haunting
Romeo’s gravely posture
Unease the mystery within
The soils and gravel moisturized
With tears of silhouette paradise
Don’t tell me of your parent’s anguish
Should we lavishly skirmish?
Knowing something is amiss
Letting our desires rest in peace
Freaking nights full of horror’s fright
Could not change our plights
Darling
Elope with me to heaven
Earth unsafe the heat would get us burnt
The rising mercury pauses
Our hearts abetting losses
Love trembles to death
The Angels wait
Clock is ticking to our senses
Hinting the peculiar madness
Another option is tragedy
What is the pedigree?
To marry you out of wedlock and flee
Is like dead but not death

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 12 November 2008

your love poems are excelling one another, Sulaiman...good write...10

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Hershe Moore 12 November 2008

beautifully translated...your words flow eloquently and soften the heart

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Sucheta Tiwari 15 November 2008

it gets extremely captivating 'the phantom..' onwards... a 10! !

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Dolan Doran 16 November 2008

a definate 10...i love the end, the 'Elope' verses....amazing. astounding metaphors. the whole poem quite literally touches the heart. love it!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 November 2008

very well done! keep writing!

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Naidz Ladia 07 January 2009

waittt, , i hve a corrction on ths...its not for every generations..coz others r using sms to send ths kisses, , , ooowwww whatta social world..

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Naidz Ladia 07 January 2009

a love letter for all generations? maybe, , , its for our generations.... but when we gage ths as poem, ths s excellent hon from u..am a late comer here so here i am, , , hehehhe came late... a very beautiful piece, , , my gosh, i dont want to put flowering wrds on ths, , u mght think i lied.. ths s EXCELLENT...SUPERB..HONORED..no one hits u hon, believe me..

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Albert Fernandez 07 January 2009

oh my my gosh i love it! it mives me butterflies! !

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Sebastine Humaemo 13 December 2008

pleasant love letter for a loved one...hmmm....cute... 'What a nag when I sleep I dream of your strawberry smiles '....best lines...

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Adriana Veloso 05 December 2008

To be honest I think that you have best poems but this one is good too bye have a good night

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