Love Me I Am Water Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Love Me I Am Water

Rating: 5.0


Come to a beach on a sunny cold day,
It's a bright Sunday, a hot bold day,
And see my moving and flowing art,
I'm dancing everywhere for you sweetheart,

Listen to me on the bank of a river,
Dive on me from the bridge, diver,
I'm so beautiful, I'm so smart,
I'm singing everywhere for you sweet heart,

Play with me on a cloudy rainy day,
Shall cool down you, the burning clay,
See the old man now over smart,
I'm playing everywhere for you sweetheart,

In your wash room you're lonely singing,
Open musical shower and see my mingling,
I am your life's integral part,
I'm raining everywhere for you sweetheart,

Come on and kiss me I'm here in a glass,
I'm Adam's drink you can never bypass,
Let me get in for your thirsty thwart.
I'm flowing everywhere for you sweetheart.

I am made for you, use wherever you like.
Sweetheart when you waste me, I dislike!
Otherwise, beautiful, handsome and so smart,
I'm charming everywhere for you sweetheart!

Tuesday, February 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: water
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 17 February 2016

Ohhhhh wooooowwww wooooww woowwww soo romantic sweet and simple. Babajaan you made my day with this beautiful heart tickling poem. Just loved the love so beautifully portrayed in this poem.10

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Mithilesh Yadav 17 February 2016

grrtt penned sirji....... tera aina hun.... tu hansti hai to hansta hun... to roti hai to rota hun...... tu mujhey dhundhey ya mai tujhey dhundey kaisey mumkin........ tu mujhmey hai, mein tujhmey hun........

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Kelly Kurt 17 February 2016

We are mostly water, the source of life.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2020

So happy that Poem Hunter just delivered this poem right before my very eyes when advertisements just shuffle poems here and there Onto my Poem List. Beautiful....Beautiful..... Loved reading it.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2020

So beautifully crafted and so wonderfully written. A poem that can only be woven and delivered by a brilliant mind. Very encompassing write that expresses in beautiful detail the importance of water in an enchanting verses. Another poetic gem. A diamond that sparkles forever. It should be Poem Of the Day.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2020

EXCELLENT! How did I miss this marvelous and one of a kind poem. One of the best poems I have ever read with a theme on water. Absolutely true! ! ! We all love water. It is an integral part of life. Without it we don't have life.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 18 February 2016

Amazing poem.....loved it....Beautifully written.....thank you for sharing :)

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M Asim Nehal 17 February 2016

Awesome....Great metaphor and nice poem with romantic touch......100+

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