louis rams

Gold Star - 6,499 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

Love Of A Parent - Poem by louis rams

They had married at a very young age
At the time they thought it was a game.
They had been together for a long time
and he thought that everything would be fine.

They had lived together for two years or more
And they thought they knew the score.
At seventeen years of age they felt they knew it all
And life was to have a ball.

With part time jobs they paid their bills
Living together was such a thrill.
Not having to worry about a curfew hour
Now ' they had all the power'.

Going out partying every weekend
Not thinking of the money that they spent.
Coming home late at night, being drunk
They would start to fight.

She started feeling some menstruation pain
And from this point on their lives would change.
She went to her doctor to check it out
Pregnant she was - there was no doubt.

Now their eyes opened to the fact
From this point on there was no turning back.
They now had a child on the way
And they could no longer go out to play.

He got a full time job and straightened up his act
And a better position he would have to attack.
He went back to school To get a better education
And to give his wife and child all that he could give
And with both their incomes they would have to live.

She worked for seven months till she
Could work no longer, and to get their house in order.
When she went to the hospital because her time was due
She found out she was having not one but two.

She gave birth to a beautiful boy and girl
He was a diamond and she a pearl.
The most precious babies you'd ever want to see
And he was the proud father - as proud as can be.

They struggled like most couples do
But he was determined to see it through.
She took her children and held them tight
For in their faces she saw their fathers might.

His love so strong for his family
And this is what they all did see.
And the rest is history.


Comments about Love Of A Parent by louis rams

  • Shashikant Nishant Sharma (5/29/2012 7:16:00 PM)


    Good poem...descriptive poetic form is well threaded to keep the flow... (Report) Reply

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  • (5/26/2012 7:47:00 PM)


    Very interesting, I really learnt a lesson from this write, it opened my eyes as young man, that the decisions I make might so tiny and small. But the impact they might have on my life might really bring so much responsibility unexpectedly, this is a great write, truely an eye opener, thank you very much for sha®ing

    The_African_son
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 25, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 26, 2012


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