! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***love Of Tears***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***love Of Tears***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1

Rating: 3.6


Trust divine as love embedded in truth
as day descends slowly by the light
moments rill on faltering art of darkness
listless yet heretical words tossed up
into fossils of kisses in impregnation

eyes look back to lost iridescence
yet ruefully blither by lurid decadence
crouching upon spatiality of reason
as heart loses gentle grace by adulation
yet blue refrains to whispers to rainbow

space flickers by dwarf memories
on threshold of intimacy from crowd
who knows tomorrow may reconcile
as letting chaste of truth to obscurity
love of tears spins on chord of tangency
slopping a shadow miffing in aberration

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Dodd 28 January 2010

Beauty, your word are liquid rubies. 'as heart loses gentle grace by adulation'

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Lynn Glover 28 January 2010

I agree with the ladies below, you have manufactured a very beautiful poem, written it seems with some hint of pragmatism. You have touched on love and truth, yet ends with a Love of Tears. Good write Doc, I liked it extreamely well. Your friend Lynn

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Marieta Maglas 30 January 2010

interesting visual metaphor into fossils of kisses in impregnation interesting metaphorical poem, very well written 10/10/10 Mary

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Sandra Martyres 30 January 2010

A poignant piece embellished with extraordinary metaphors and a very rich vocabulary 10

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Beauty Philosophy 02 February 2010

A touching poem, well crafted around a nice metaphor.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 February 2010

Feeling spilling tolling [Ring slowly] on my psyche …and waiting for billing…[free] The price is Pure Joy Thanks for such a poem….words are to me dumb and fossilized sorry.. 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Sara Tehrani 17 February 2010

i have no idea what the poem is about but thats probably because of my lack of education with vocabulary... i do feel alot of emotions and passion merging out of each verse... it brought tears to my eyes... beautifully written :)

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Braja K Sarkar 13 February 2010

Very touching poem, beautifully crafted.A great feelings..

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Rajaram Ramachandran 07 February 2010

So deep is the love of tears expressed in a nice poetical manner.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 07 February 2010

Exceptional! Love and tears linked together along this sojourn.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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