! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***love Of Tears***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***love Of Tears***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1

Rating: 3.6


Trust divine as love embedded in truth
as day descends slowly by the light
moments rill on faltering art of darkness
listless yet heretical words tossed up
into fossils of kisses in impregnation

eyes look back to lost iridescence
yet ruefully blither by lurid decadence
crouching upon spatiality of reason
as heart loses gentle grace by adulation
yet blue refrains to whispers to rainbow

space flickers by dwarf memories
on threshold of intimacy from crowd
who knows tomorrow may reconcile
as letting chaste of truth to obscurity
love of tears spins on chord of tangency
slopping a shadow miffing in aberration

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 07 February 2010

lovely poem even when one is very happy there can be tears of joy......... i like your style dear Shub its an unique one-you are really original and dont seem to be influenced by any other poet unlike me--I can be influenced by justttttt any one here maybe someday I'll write a sequel to yoursss till then-have a good day a tenner from me anjali

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Aaaa Aaaaaaa 04 February 2010

i really like your style... i enjoyed so much...

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Lady Grace 02 February 2010

''space flickers by dwarf memories on threshold of intimacy from crowd who knows tomorrow may reconcile'' these are simple lines but great impact to readers..so nice, so touching, so gentle to the ears of the readers..smileeeeee

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Pradyumna Jyotir 02 February 2010

A poem which touches your heart.....eloquent...and poignant.

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Debasish Mishra 02 February 2010

Fine presentation...........Thought provoking! ! !

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 February 2010

Feeling spilling tolling [Ring slowly] on my psyche …and waiting for billing…[free] The price is Pure Joy Thanks for such a poem….words are to me dumb and fossilized sorry.. 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Sara Tehrani 17 February 2010

i have no idea what the poem is about but thats probably because of my lack of education with vocabulary... i do feel alot of emotions and passion merging out of each verse... it brought tears to my eyes... beautifully written :)

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Braja K Sarkar 13 February 2010

Very touching poem, beautifully crafted.A great feelings..

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Rajaram Ramachandran 07 February 2010

So deep is the love of tears expressed in a nice poetical manner.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 07 February 2010

Exceptional! Love and tears linked together along this sojourn.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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