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*** Love Or Lust ***

Rating: 4.3

The drought kills the thirst
Harvest is a rarity
Dry winds dance in skin deep heat
Leaves abandon trees
Grounds crack in branches
I walk in pain
As needles climb up my feet
My lungs shiver of dryness
My heart pumps like a drum beat
Somewhere under the canopy

Of the velvet sky
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Viviana Croccolo-Huwald 30 September 2019

I have attempted to write about, however it is a that drives to something un-expected.

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Adeeb Alfateh 09 July 2019

I walk in pain As needles climb up my feet My lungs shiver of dryness My heart pumps like a drum beat Somewhere under the canopy Of the velvet sky A woman in tan Waving to me To join her party Dig and cover A gravely game great write great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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kyle napier 05 October 2018

i like balls and shaft

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Native Dreamer 11 June 2012

You express yourself clearly

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Duh Huh 22 June 2009

Amber and Raymichelle are right on target. All i can add is thank you for sharing this insightful poem. :)

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I enjoyed reading the struggles and conflicts in your words. Really great!

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Sally Plumb 12 March 2009

I love your last remark - love cannot fly on a single wing.

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Pilar Killen 20 February 2009

Amber is extremely correct!

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Christine Kerr 02 February 2009

Your poem hit it right on but I definiatly loved the words in your PS Thanks for sharing

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Amber Green 29 January 2009

Interesting. Very nice though. P.s. The heart is the only thing that feels. The mind is simply what keeps us from acting on every tiny emotion.

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