*** Love Or Lust *** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

I enjoyed reading the struggles and conflicts in your words. Really great!

okay not what you wold expect when you said love poems i kinda freaked but this is the most non mushy emotinal love poem i've ever read and it has a clear meaning Izzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzy

Rose isn’t dead yet yes its never die coz we grow it in our heart, love rose

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! SULAIMAN MOHD YUSOF I LOVE DIS POEM OMG I REALLY LIKE IT KEEP UP WHAT UR DOIN BECAUSE ONE DAY YOU COULD BY A PULBISHER FOR BOOKS AND I MIGHT HAVE TO LOOK YOU UP I LOVE YOUR POEM KEEP THA WORK UP. - Talayha

very well written, i enjoyed it

I have attempted to write about, however it is a that drives to something un-expected.

I walk in pain As needles climb up my feet My lungs shiver of dryness My heart pumps like a drum beat Somewhere under the canopy Of the velvet sky A woman in tan Waving to me To join her party Dig and cover A gravely game great write great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

i like balls and shaft

You express yourself clearly

Amber and Raymichelle are right on target. All i can add is thank you for sharing this insightful poem. :)