Love Poem Poem by Little Sunshine

Love Poem

Rating: 4.5


let me write to you a love poem
then i will make you its hero
i just wanna know when can i write it
coz when i am with you
i just wanna cry
and when i am far away from you
i just wanna die
but maybe someday i can write it
when the sun wants to shine in the night
and the stars want to dance in the light

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emerald Gk 20 October 2008

hey, lovely poem! thnkz

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Serenity Prayer 02 October 2008

beautiful job. very passionate.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 02 October 2008

A Loving Poem, Hataw... Andrew 10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 September 2008

The last two lines are beautiful.

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Dear Hataw..I like the last two lines of your poem..'when the sun wants to shine in the night / and the stars want to dance in the light'. This is poetry. Go on with this style. Don't cry only but give some hope and imagination. Some of my new 36 poems have the same colour as yours. Have a look and dropp a comment

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2016

To be with love! ! With the very ways of the truth. Nice work.

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Hazem Al Jaber 13 September 2009

You’re my angel, my love, everything I want you to be. You’re my angel sent from above, to share your life with me. sweet well done.. hazem al..

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Anjali Sinha 20 June 2009

such a cute love poem -10 anjali

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Eyan Desir 17 February 2009

hahaha... this poem is funny i liked it

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Thad Wilk 30 December 2008

A lovely poem Hataw, i especially like the last two lines here, wonderful sentiments! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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