Love Poem Poem by Little Sunshine

Love Poem

Rating: 4.5


let me write to you a love poem
then i will make you its hero
i just wanna know when can i write it
coz when i am with you
i just wanna cry
and when i am far away from you
i just wanna die
but maybe someday i can write it
when the sun wants to shine in the night
and the stars want to dance in the light

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jack Tex 25 August 2008

You are one great poet, honest. I just fell in love with you and the way you act out your thoughts and feelings. Gotta give you my 10 on this. Keep up the good work.

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April Hammel 25 August 2008

waaw..i like this poem very very much.it's a beautiful 'love' poem.Good work.

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Nathaniel Booker 01 September 2008

The Hero is you Hataw. You are the definition, the mere fact that you seek to do for someone else before ever they ask, if they do at all, makes you the hero. Beautiful Be Well, Nate

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As long as you have hope and love you will gain in strength.Your poems are very sad but it is in the hearts of all of us that we believe, have faith and ihave hope.The whole poem is beautiful especially the last two lines.I wish you the best life offers.

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Dear Hataw..I like the last two lines of your poem..'when the sun wants to shine in the night / and the stars want to dance in the light'. This is poetry. Go on with this style. Don't cry only but give some hope and imagination. Some of my new 36 poems have the same colour as yours. Have a look and dropp a comment

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2016

To be with love! ! With the very ways of the truth. Nice work.

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Hazem Al Jaber 13 September 2009

You’re my angel, my love, everything I want you to be. You’re my angel sent from above, to share your life with me. sweet well done.. hazem al..

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Anjali Sinha 20 June 2009

such a cute love poem -10 anjali

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Eyan Desir 17 February 2009

hahaha... this poem is funny i liked it

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Thad Wilk 30 December 2008

A lovely poem Hataw, i especially like the last two lines here, wonderful sentiments! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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