Love`s Heat Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Love`s Heat

Rating: 4.8


because of the heat of your love
my heart had melt
i knew not what`s happening
but i knew what i felt
i sensed it was meant to be
and it was fate
that brought u to me
on that specific date
i was the fish
and u were the bait
i knew i`ll be hurt
but i could`nt wait
i didn`t realize that
there was a catch
you can`t have an eagle`s egg
without getting a scratch
the consequence was that
for eternity i`ll be damned
to have the devil`s worst curse
that hatred for me banned
and to experience love
at first hand
or even worse
to control love and
snatchVenus`s purse

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marria Attar 22 November 2008

Wow...Wonderful poem, very well written, Great Job!

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Reina Lorenzo 22 November 2008

hmmm. great piece, well penned..

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 20 November 2008

I love the line about the eagles eggs.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 20 November 2008

i love this poem. it shows true emotion and experience nice one

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i really like this one its one of my favorites i love it....

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Sandra Zavec 12 September 2009

I like all your poems, but there's something special about this one...very well written

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008

Lovely poem! I enjoy reading it.

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Kesav Easwaran 26 November 2008

subdued in love...but the feelings there of strongly expressed...a good romantic piece to read...10

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Arin Tumanuvao 24 November 2008

Wow, it seems ur experienced in the 'love' department....good job, and keep writing.

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Monlano Kim 23 November 2008

With all your love poems I say that you're a romantic guy in need of a perfect soul mate that understands you! I love your poems...very passionate.

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