She Poem by Tareq Jalabi

the grief is intense and i am glad you used the female gender to express the demise of humanity. Not to say anything negative about the male gender but humanity bear, deliver and raise the human race from inception to birth...thanks for the invite...

emotional poem very good

a very touching poem..a well expressed emotion and well versed...good poem...

i can't say it was the best but it was good to read i'll give you a two thums up on it keep up the good work...10

That was beautiful. You seduced me. At first, i thought it was a simple love poem until i reached the end. it was intense. It's so sad to say that it does seem at times like humanity is dying. The piece flowed very easy. pleasing ot the ears. great stuff.

‘…the only time i cried // was when humanity died ‘ Very touchy and moving line. Ten++ dr.sakti

с п а с и б о з а п р е д л о ж е н и е п р о ч е с т ь т в о и р а б о т ы ! н а с а м о м д е л е о ч е н ь х о р о ш о , к р а с и в о и в р и ф м у . з н а е ш ь , к о г д а м ы Р о с с и я н е т в о р и м н е н а р у с с к о м я з ы к е а н а , к п р и м е р у , а н г л и й с к о м , н а с в с е г д а о т л и ч а е т р у с с к а я л ю б о в ь к р и ф м е , к м а г и и с л о в и в ы р а ж е н и й ... т е б е у д а л о с ь с о б л ю с т и з а к о н ы р и ф м ы , м н е о ч е н ь п о н р а в и л о с ь

Strong emotion here! Good poem overall!

Words have a sad sensitivity

the first stanza was, unfortunately, not my favorite. i do very much enjoy the ending of the second stanza though. overall, i enjoy this piece.