I`ve never cried
until she died
lying in bed
rolling from side to side
closing my eyes
i`m nothing but blind
no more rest
no more sleep
my soul is destroyed
from surface to deep
i`ve never wet the land
where i stand
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i`ve never dropped a tear
in a moment of fear
till the time my heart
was torn by a spear
till the time my guide
was no longer near
i cried and cried
my face never dried
the only time i cried
was when humanity died
a very touching poem..a well expressed emotion and well versed...good poem...
i can't say it was the best but it was good to read i'll give you a two thums up on it keep up the good work...10
That was beautiful. You seduced me. At first, i thought it was a simple love poem until i reached the end. it was intense. It's so sad to say that it does seem at times like humanity is dying. The piece flowed very easy. pleasing ot the ears. great stuff.
‘…the only time i cried // was when humanity died ‘ Very touchy and moving line. Ten++ dr.sakti
с п а с и б о з а п р е д л о ж е н и е п р о ч е с т ь т в о и р а б о т ы ! н а с а м о м д е л е о ч е н ь х о р о ш о , к р а с и в о и в р и ф м у . з н а е ш ь , к о г д а м ы Р о с с и я н е т в о р и м н е н а р у с с к о м я з ы к е а н а , к п р и м е р у , а н г л и й с к о м , н а с в с е г д а о т л и ч а е т р у с с к а я л ю б о в ь к р и ф м е , к м а г и и с л о в и в ы р а ж е н и й ... т е б е у д а л о с ь с о б л ю с т и з а к о н ы р и ф м ы , м н е о ч е н ь п о н р а в и л о с ь
the first stanza was, unfortunately, not my favorite. i do very much enjoy the ending of the second stanza though. overall, i enjoy this piece.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the grief is intense and i am glad you used the female gender to express the demise of humanity. Not to say anything negative about the male gender but humanity bear, deliver and raise the human race from inception to birth...thanks for the invite...