Paul Sebastian


Love's Intimacy - Poem by Paul Sebastian

Oh mirror, mirror on the wall
Break open my guarded seal
Pray tell, who am I, after all?
Stripping masks that conceal

Open doors of my gut feelings
See the diamond setting, I am
I’m not an island, slowly dying
Privacy myth is believers’ sham

Let the real me, surface
To know me as I really am
When I’m real, I’m none else
Love me then, for who I am

Love is inner-most sharing
Love is freely communicating
Love is not afraid of real being
Love is knowing me and accepting

Real me is my love gift to you
Giving all of me, completely
To grow our love deep and true
To mesh our love-life intimately

Let’s strive for our souls’ unity
Therein lies blissful happiness
Let trust thrive in our honesty
For love peaks in togetherness

16.09.2015

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Love's Intimacy by Paul Sebastian

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/19/2015 4:20:00 AM)


    Verily, accepting the truth is a great virtue,
    Loved reading the poem........................10
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/16/2015 1:15:00 PM)


    Let’s strive for our souls’ unity
    Therein lies blissful happiness
    Let trust thrive in our honesty
    For love peaks in togetherness.......true dictum. A brilliant poem so nicely depicted. Thanks for sharing such an intensive poem. .......10
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  • Rachel Hill (9/16/2015 11:47:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem that say's it all...ALL TIME AND EFFORT ARE ALL WORTHY composing this poem... (Report) Reply

  • Miraj Raha (9/16/2015 11:41:00 AM)


    My goodness, how did you write this, the strict meter and rhyme flowed exceptionally well throughout the poem.And the meaning is all the more profound.you are a truly gifted author. (Report) Reply

  • Anita Sharma (9/16/2015 11:37:00 AM)


    love the mirror on liked it (Report) Reply

  • Anita Sharma (9/16/2015 11:36:00 AM)


    good write liked it much (Report) Reply

  • Anita Sharma (9/16/2015 11:34:00 AM)


    this is fantastic write (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 16, 2015



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