Love Story (1) …. Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan
Love Story (1) ….
I heard a love story about a very young couple, residing in the UK
he was a kindest doctor
had his practice at the house
he was always waiting for her returning from her work
although he had his own busy practice, he was always waiting for her coming home
they were so in love, although married for ten years, they were still in love deeply.
they got two sons, one 5 years old and the youngest still a toddler.
she was the secretary of the literary department of the university of P.in the UK.
she was loveliest, but she oft had a tragic smile, her face was always full melancholy, but she was very sociable, always exchanging menus with the foreign students
one beautiful afternoon, she wanted to go out, but he forbade her
she had already called a babysit for their youngest son.
she told him that she wished to see an opera in town
she knew that she could not ask him to accompany her since he had a busy practice
so she invited her female colleague to go with her
she had bought already the tickets for the opera
he forbade her once again
then all of a sudden he slapped her on her face
she ran away, but stumbled upon the iron fence, because her high heels got stuck
on the artistic garden floor
she fell and blood was everywhere
you won't believe this!
she was dead, just like that.
He called the police and told the whole story
the street was closed for outsiders
is this truly true love?
or too young to love in reality?
love is a feeling, oftentimes very tender and passionate
but at some other times laden with very heavy emotions and an aggressive attitude
now he can never call his house a home anymore
is this really true love?
I have my doubts
but perhaps I am wrong
she was very hard hitted, and that's why she fell upon the iron fence
she died at once
since that iron got through her body
this is no gossip nor a thriller
this must be reality
but this couple must still get mature
is true love such passionate?
is true love such aggressive?
I heard about this love story,
and I had thought about it
indeed this is true
a true eerie love story....
©Sylvia Frances Chan
Monday, the 3rd June 2019 -
this must be reality
but this couple must still get mature
is true love such passionate?
is true love such aggressive?
I heard about this love story,
and I had thought about it
indeed this is true
a true eerie love story....
©Sylvia Frances Chan
Monday, the 3rd June 2019 -
Thank you so much for your valuable response and your precious visit to my poem site, dear Kostas
Thank you, my friend, Sylvia for bringing right before our eyes this kind of story. Out of this tragic event, a moral lesson springs and the readers will be guided by the circumstances narrated. Beautifully conveyed write.
thank you so much for your perfect feedback and excellent words, they do contribute a very lot to this poem about killing own spouse accidentally. Thank you for your valuable response and feedback. Your very precious comprehension as I can read in all your comments and compliments, I do appreciate a very lot and much respect are from my side. May God's Blessings be greatest and fall upon you and your beloved family. My gratitude is endlessly.
I'll tell you frankly, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, this is a true accident happened in the UK. I am still shocked, since the husband is called now a killer. In all marriages, this accident can happen eventhough true love is there. How tragic this must be for the young sons, they still need a mother now she is dead.I have created this true story like this, to make that seem not so eerie.
Inflicting injury to our spouse is and will always be prohibited and must be punished. The vow that we made before God and men that we should cherish each other is violated the moment we lay hands on our spouse.
Indeed, it is violated at the moment one of the couple slapped the other. Their solemn promise before God of loving and cherishing each other until death do them part. Thank you so much for your comments most valuable.
Love and respect must go hand in hand. If we love our spouse, we must respect her rights to do things that make her happy as long as it will not prejudice the relationship. Marriage is not tantamount of surrendering our freedom. We can still live life.to the fullest as long as it is not detrimental to the smooth relationship between spouses.
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4/25/2024 2:04:32 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Too young to love! ! ! ! Love and art. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thank yiou so much, dear Edward. I appreciate very much your precious visit and your valuable responses. My greetings to your poetic Muse. God´s Blesses you greatest. Amen.