Love-Struck Mess! Poem by Magic What'sHerName

Love-Struck Mess!

Rating: 5.0


I used to long for your every touch
I think I wanted it too much
Because this is such
A sad thing for you to leave like this
Why did you have to just diss
Me as you walk out my door?
Why couldn't you do it before?
Before I fell in love with you
You make me so blue
That I wish I was somewhere else but here
Where I didn't have this damn tear
Streaming down my cheek
As you take one last peek
Through that door as you slam it shut
But you know what?
I hope you die as you walk out that door
I hope lightening hits you as you fall to the floor
But behind all this bitterness
You've made me a lovestruck mess!
And all the bad things I want to happen to you
I'd cry if they would have happened to you
I love you!
But please don't make fun of me
If you must leave!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alandra Moreira 25 June 2009

he aint worth it.. i know you feel like he is, but if cant see how special you are and he aint helping you shine then he dont appreciate and you and he aint worth it... you need a man not a child, its difficult to be love... what isn't worth fighting for isnt worht having if he wont fight to keep you then he doesnt think your worth it and you need to find someone who does hon, someone will come along and dry your tears.

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