Love With Nature Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Love With Nature

Rating: 5.0


The sound of nature
Where the birds were singing
The sky was bright with sunlight
Some butterflies were fluttering
From flower to flower
Life's journey looking delightful
The trees a bit soggy the air still damp
The sound of water crashing against the rocks
Today nature was so different
And I lost in thoughts
Maybe I am in love
And my mind was playing tricks
The wind danced upon my cheeks,
Lightly ruffling the tiny wisps of hair
Mocking at my situation
As if glazed over, my liquid heart
I felt as if someone kissed me
And I turned my golden kissed face upwards,
admiring the marvelous array of colours
Flaps of cool water continue to rush over my feet
Crouching in silence,
My mind is clear of any worry or pain

Wednesday, September 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,nature love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 28 September 2016

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, yes! The best physician in the world resides in nature. He treats the body and the soul! Just like this pleasant poem made my heart love how the sun feels on my upturned face! ! :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 September 2016

Looking delightful! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Mihaela Pirjol 29 September 2016

A descriptive, emotional, and candid poetic expression of a beautiful day spent in Nature - the healer and mother to us all.

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Nosheen Irfan 29 September 2016

What a wonderful write. You are awesome at writing poems on the theme of love. Nature n love are entwined so beautifully. A huge 10

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Akhtar Jawad 29 September 2016

I felt as if someone kissed me And I turned my golden kissed face upwards, admiring the marvelous array of colours So beautiful.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 September 2016

Birds sing here. Butterflies flutter from flower to flower. Life's journey is delightful here. Very interesting and lovely poem is composed and shared here.10

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