Lovely Poem by F R Wills

Lovely

Rating: 4.2


Lovely, that's what she seems.
But truly, that's all dreams.
She tries, of that she's sure,
But at empathy she's poor.
Patronise you, she will not.
But just in case you forgot.
Lovely, is what she seems.
Will she fall for you in her dreams?
That's not the question you must ask.
Instead tell her you'll forgive her past.

Tuesday, August 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,redemption
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 23 April 2020

A concise and witty piece of poetry elegantly crafted in verse with rhythmic splendour.

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Angela Bontle Ditumiso 21 October 2019

Your ink is so refreshing!

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F R Wills 30 August 2019

Thank you for your lovely feeback.

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Sachidananda Panda 30 August 2019

" Lovely, is what she seems. Will she fall for you in her dreams? That's not the question you must ask. Instead tell her you'll forgive her past. " Excellent..! how well it settles the theme of forgiveness as central to the relationship we cherish to grow with.. Beautiful...!

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