Lovely Life Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Lovely Life

Rating: 4.8


I would definitely prefer and ask Almighty
Why on one side love and other side pity?
Why we should be sent to from holy land?
Get into acts and perform with dirty hand

Were we not welcome there and dear to you?
Had we chosen as target lost grace from thou?
All your messages, words preach and say
I am almost here to guide and lead your way

Have we to expose ourselves to testing ground?
Lost in crowd forever and not easily to be found
We may loose peace and beautiful heavenly sound
Even though human being, roam as vultures around

You know it well we may forget our holy mission
We will commit sin and come to you for admission
No remorse at heart but to show it as confusion
In search of goal but without idea or divine vision

You generally preach we are God’s children
Take everybody’s care in sacred heaven
Beautiful trees laden with fruits in garden
What on earth we will achieve or when?

We may not be proved as worthy disciples
Sometimes may err or compromise the principles
Temptation may run high at every moment
Time may not be left to think over or lament

Nothing seems so unique and common in nature
Hand may have palm but with different fingers
Colour or cast faith and belief simply different
Apprehension and mistrust look certainly apparent

It is sailing through rough weather
Storms struck with no means to wither
How to save self and still be so near
No to show displeasure or speak words to hear

Please fill our hearts with love and kindness
Inject ideas to lead life without blindness
Certainly we will prove our worth or credibility
Lovely life without any provocation or hostility

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Justin Unanue 04 January 2010

To be honest religious poems aren't my cup of tea.

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Pradyumna Jyotir 16 March 2010

This message carries a universal message which is beautiful and global in nature.....indeed if we abide by it.....life would be wonderful....

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 January 2010

A great wish like that would always be cherished.Well done Hasmukh!

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Antonio Liao 11 January 2010

what a harmonic panorama of view is life would be.....so be in our hearts begin the creation of your poem.....beautiful concept of life existence...God bless...a 10 +++

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Joseph Poewhit 06 January 2010

GOD created good & evil to test our hearts - though GOD seen man's heart is desperately wicked

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Aira Olayvar 05 January 2010

A lovely life to wish... for in reality, it is full of hardships and plea... Anyways, let's just enjoy the life given... make each day worth living. Keep smiling! :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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