Theodora (Theo) Onken

Gold Star - 25,323 Points (Washington State)

(((Loves Fire))) - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Fire of Love
Rapidly burns itself out cold
Embers glow dead

Haiku On The Death Of Love


Comments about (((Loves Fire))) by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • (1/1/2008 10:25:00 AM)

    Hi Theo! Short and sweet but lots of heat, This (Loves Fire) ! ! *10*! !
    Friend Thad
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  • (1/1/2008 2:52:00 AM)

    I hope it keeps burning so the embers will not glow dead...A lovely write from a lovely person (Report)Reply

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  • (1/1/2008 2:04:00 AM)

    Why thank you David! You are always too generous! with your praise!

    I will not comment, if this is a personal write, i only will say that it comes from my heart, the deep recesses!

    Blessings, to you as well, my friend!
    Always your friend, in spirit,
    Theoxxxxxxxxxxxx
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  • (1/1/2008 1:54:00 AM)

    Happy New Year Theo. Lets hope fire of your love hasn't died and the embers still glow well into the year ahead. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend.
    Love and Hugs to start the New Year.
    David xxxxx
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 1, 2008



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