Loving Touch Poem by Mashiur Rahman

Loving Touch

Rating: 4.4


I'm losing everything in love
Crying silently, to touch the heavenly feeling of true love.

Now my situation is,
Like that bird trapped by predators.
Now my situation is,
Like an insect trapped in a spider's web.

Fall into the trap of love,
My condition is just useless ornaments!
Useless juice-cans!

I'm losing everything in love except some hidden words.
How much love is found in the universal loving touch!

Wednesday, November 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Theme Of Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nasarudheen Parameswaran 16 December 2016

If we give expecting nothing back not to worry; not even sorry. Dedicate acts to Allah.He will take care of.Agony of desolate flesh pulsate in this poem well. .

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 March 2019

Write comment. Great poem, Mashiur. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2021

"Bird in hunter's trap' is the exact metaphor for the context. Loved the poem.5 stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 February 2021

'm losing everythingi in love except some hidden words. How much love is found in the universal loving touch! So true! A brilliant poem full of melancholy! Brilliantly thought! 5 Strs!

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Luo Zhihai 19 January 2021

Fall into the trap of love, Love is sweet, too. Who can think about it?

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Bharati Nayak 12 January 2021

I'm losing everythingi in love except some hidden words. How much love is found in the universal loving touch! ----The poem takes us from earthly to heavenly feelings of love

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Susan Williams 12 January 2021

Ah-ha, now I see why you sent me here to read this poem... the topic sure can he handled in many different ways, can; t it?

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Dr. Antony Theodore 09 January 2021

But now, my situation is exactly like that The crisis of the bird's in hunters trap When trapped in net For universal loving touch. you travel from the mundane to the Divine.. to the universal touch.. thank you dear poet Mashiur Rahman

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Naogaon, Bangladesh
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