Ludicrous Is Love Poem by Paul Brookes

Ludicrous Is Love

Rating: 5.0


thin arc of bowed buttermilk moon shines like a sliver of cheese.

scudding silver sails of cloud elude capture
as the stars look down miffed and mysterious,
can they really predict fate.

sometimes love rides the train like a hobo searching for a home
and Venus laughing hearty winks.
so where does love begin?

never in the bright ring of the sun
but in the clandestine night.

Saturday, August 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 05 September 2020

'thin arc of bowed buttermilk moon shines like a sliver of cheese' a wonderful juxtaposition of thrilling lunar images to savour

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Terry Craddock 09 September 2020

Luminous Lunar Glowing Beacon Light thrilling hook lunar images to darkness disc savour luminous glowing beacon night light to lost soul flavour out shine star sparkle twinkle ripple sole neighbour Inspired by the poem 'Ludicrous Is Love' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

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Bri Edwards 01 December 2024

LUDICROUS: so foolish, unreasonable, or out of place as to be amusing; ridiculous. 'it's ludicrous that I have been fined' Similar: absurd ridiculous farcical laughable'

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Susan Williams 02 September 2020

sometimes love rides the train like a hobo searching for a home and Venus laughing hearty winks.- - - oh good images here

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 August 2020

A well composed piece. Truly splendid.....10+++

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Bri Edwards 01 December 2024

Paul, I regret that you have departed PH due to not having enough Readers here.: ( bri : )

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Bri Edwards 01 December 2024

'clan·des·tine /klanˈdestən, ˈklandəsˌtēn/ adjective kept secret or done secretively, especially because illicit.'

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Bri Edwards 01 December 2024

Venus: 'In Roman mythology, Venus is the goddess of love, beauty, fertility, desire, , victory, and prosperity' It is also one of Earth's planets AND a famous female tennis player.

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Bri Edwards 01 December 2024

I enjoy the alliteration 'miffed and mysterious', BUT why are the stars MIFFED, for goodness sake? ? ? Hmm?

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Bri Edwards 01 December 2024

MIFFED: miffed /mift/ adjective (INFORMAL) ' somewhat annoyed; peeved '

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