No matter how blinding is your ray,
I too shall have my day.
You being reduced to a minnow;
I shall have my moment to show.
You gave me light;
You gave me life;
And you gave me humiliation too.
I have lived all my life, to live that moment true.
When for a few minutes, I shall overshadow;
Over your surface, I shall grow.
A moment of pride and strength;
when the whole universe shall see through;
Me engulfing you.
A moment of pride and strength; when the whole universe shall see through; Me engulfing you....May your wish come true10+
very nice poem....significant simile of lunar mood...well penned...
There ya go! See? Kinda nice how fast you can work. I am glad you are so easy to work with. :) Deborah Cromer
Nice write on the eclipse.... as I think that is what you refer to in this poem...
For some reason I just didnt enjoy this poem as your other poems. Im not quite too sure why i lost my focus but, some of the metaphors were good some others were weak. BUT thats just in a teenagers opinion! !
astronomically true but religious myth do you believe in all this rituals of bath and dip in the holy sea? otherwise good write -10 anjali
Excellent..........inspirational for me........ awesome poem........; -)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent concept and told with flair..... well done 10 from Fay