Lunar Might Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Lunar Might

Rating: 4.9


No matter how blinding is your ray,

I too shall have my day.

You being reduced to a minnow;

I shall have my moment to show.


You gave me light;

You gave me life;

And you gave me humiliation too.

I have lived all my life, to live that moment true.

When for a few minutes, I shall overshadow;

Over your surface, I shall grow.

A moment of pride and strength;

when the whole universe shall see through;

Me engulfing you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 23 July 2009

Excellent concept and told with flair..... well done 10 from Fay

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Indira Renganathan 23 July 2009

A moment of pride and strength; when the whole universe shall see through; Me engulfing you....May your wish come true10+

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Carol Gall 23 July 2009

this is really good....

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Ency Bearis 22 July 2009

very nice poem....significant simile of lunar mood...well penned...

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Deborah Cromer 22 July 2009

There ya go! See? Kinda nice how fast you can work. I am glad you are so easy to work with. :) Deborah Cromer

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Sandra Martyres 28 July 2009

Nice write on the eclipse.... as I think that is what you refer to in this poem...

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Danny H 25 July 2009

For some reason I just didnt enjoy this poem as your other poems. Im not quite too sure why i lost my focus but, some of the metaphors were good some others were weak. BUT thats just in a teenagers opinion! !

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Anjali Sinha 24 July 2009

astronomically true but religious myth do you believe in all this rituals of bath and dip in the holy sea? otherwise good write -10 anjali

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Shekhar Joshi 23 July 2009

Excellent..........inspirational for me........ awesome poem........; -)

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Rakesh Bedi 23 July 2009

Without considering the Hindu mythology; a nice poem, nikunj!

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