Lustful Date Poem by Sreekala Sukumaran

Lustful Date

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Majestic Indian Ocean
Manly Bay of Bengal
Gorgeous Arabian Sea
Exquisitely joined
In three different shades
What an attractive sight.

Walked into the water
She longed for his touch
Loved his presence
Dipped herself in him
And lustfully merged
What a romantic sight.

She lying on his shore
Rolled in sticky mud
He clasped her to him
Caressing her gracious body
Enjoys to its zenith
What an erotic sight.

Sun enters deep clouds
Gradually sky turns dim
Spreads like amazing carpet
Calmly he slides down
Vanishes into her dark sea
What a passionate sight….

Wednesday, March 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kishore Kumar Das 30 March 2016

marvellous description...

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Kishore Kumar Das 30 March 2016

marvellous description.....must be at kanyakumari!

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Robyn Selters 30 March 2016

Especially sensuous are the closing lines to this incredible imagery!

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Good poem, sensuous

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 November 2016

Hi Sreekala, Very beautifully penned, equally sensuous. And passionate. Wonderful presentation, on how nature arranges itself for the consummation of love: Sun enters deep clouds Gradually sky turns dim Spreads like amazing carpet 100+

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Crystal Pierce 20 October 2016

Well written. I love it.

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Ravi Sathasivam 18 April 2016

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

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Rich in romance and swimming in the sea of sensuality! Well done my friend!

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