Magic Of Love Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

Magic Of Love

Rating: 4.8


Let the heart
dwell in the fountain of love
where love may continuously flow
into the abyss of emptiness
deep within the soul.

Let the fountain of love
embrace the quivering body
to warm it like a fur
and wash away the fears.

Let the flow
touch the numb lips
and perforate within
where frost resides
let the magic of love
subsist eternally...


11th of May 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 24 August 2008

heart when glows by the gleams of love rose still stares through its scarlet red reed seems to nod its head by the florence soul yet exalted etcing the ray divine..............simply wonder rills through the ripples......great write,10+, thanks for sharing

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Tom Balch 23 August 2008

Its magic, as is your work, regards Tom

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Godspower Oshodin 22 August 2008

wow, it's such a nice piece. i really enjoyed this thrilling poem. thanks Joan....

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 21 August 2008

beautiful! keep writing! I like the words, where love may continously flowing. could you read my poems too? specially, Valley of Heart, Young, and Who are you? thank you.

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Tia Maria 21 August 2008

Lovely Joan - LOVE does just magically make everything ok. We must never lose site of pure love, which begins within, as you have so expressed.....

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 18 July 2009

I like the flow of the fountain of love.

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Shaun Evans 08 September 2008

May your heart be forever filled with poetry and love.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 August 2008

Yes love has it's own magic. Nice poem.

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Riquetta Elliott 27 August 2008

I wish I could find love at this moment, but I will someday patiently. Very good poem.

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John Raubenheimer 25 August 2008

A fervent wish, almost a prayer. Well spoken.

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