Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 288 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

Mail # 1 - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

I sent you an ether mail
To tell you my sorry tale
If that bad that mail you feel
My request; delet that mail

09 04 08

Comments about Mail # 1 by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • (4/14/2018 7:29:00 AM)

    A NEW FORMAT CRISPY (Report) Reply

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  • (1/12/2010 1:10:00 AM)

    Celestial [ethereal] mail are nothing but our thoughts…we dump in ether by penta or more bytes every picoseconds…LOL!

    Swami Vivekananda once opined all our thoughts are stored in subtle form…in ether…and operates thro’ the thinker or others especially Noble Thoughts faster than others...Thanks Sir…
    10 [from heart]
    Ms. Nivedita
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  • (12/31/2009 1:30:00 AM)

    Well written piece. Yeah its so common but well written...Winnie (Report) Reply

  • (7/14/2009 7:04:00 PM)

    usual matter, we do...yet! special action it rejoice…..such wonderful poem of
    simplicity in a mess world....thank for the reminder....a 10 +
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  • (3/31/2009 8:17:00 AM)

    a very clever mail...sir please read my ' a vote for 49 o' and 'a spring' (Report) Reply

  • (11/23/2008 9:05:00 AM)

    Mail can be deleted from the mail box... but can I delet the tale from my actual memory box... no... Kesavji... (Report) Reply

  • (9/29/2008 9:34:00 PM)

    Life would be so much simpler wouldn't it if we could delet what we don't like all the time. Very clever. (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray (7/25/2008 7:37:00 AM)

    Mail can be deleted
    not the sorry tale,
    It would be stored in gray cells
    erase! you will fail.
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  • (6/10/2008 12:34:00 AM)

    Yes, at times we resort to! (Report) Reply

  • (4/16/2008 8:12:00 AM)

    not a haiku, deepti... it's a hai(ja) ku! (Report) Reply

  • (4/16/2008 7:00:00 AM)

    ha ha..thats a sweet one...
    but i dont think it fulfills the Haiku demands.... is'nt haiku's b supposed to b 5/75 sylaable count... i dont have much knowledge but do clarify me..
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  • (4/12/2008 4:03:00 AM)

    A nice little haiku about modern technology, well written by you,
    Lynda x
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  • (4/11/2008 12:09:00 PM)

    Conveying the sometimes oh-so-serious-was-it? in an offhand yet telling manner, is it? Another delightful read! You really are good at this! (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2008 5:15:00 AM)

    yes aabha...hope this four liner would help lovers wash off the small small misgivings that spurt out at times between them... (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2008 2:39:00 AM)

    Apt and suggestive request and sweet too for it reflects a host of thoughts just in few words... yes, I agree that sometime trivial matters become grave due to misinterpretations.
    Sir, you are a perfect master of words and epigrams...your witticism speaks loud and clear and resonate, thank you.
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  • (4/9/2008 10:33:00 PM)

    hahha very nice, I wasn't expecting that ending. great job (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 9, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 21, 2008

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