Mail # 1 Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Mail # 1



I sent you an ether mail
To tell you my sorry tale
If that bad that mail you feel
My request; delet that mail

09 04 08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Desantis 09 April 2008

hahha very nice, I wasn't expecting that ending. great job

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Abha Sharma 10 April 2008

Apt and suggestive request and sweet too for it reflects a host of thoughts just in few words... yes, I agree that sometime trivial matters become grave due to misinterpretations. Sir, you are a perfect master of words and epigrams...your witticism speaks loud and clear and resonate, thank you.

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Kesav Easwaran 10 April 2008

yes aabha...hope this four liner would help lovers wash off the small small misgivings that spurt out at times between them...

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Usha Pisharody 11 April 2008

Conveying the sometimes oh-so-serious-was-it? in an offhand yet telling manner, is it? Another delightful read! You really are good at this!

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Lynda Robson 12 April 2008

A nice little haiku about modern technology, well written by you, Lynda x

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A NEW FORMAT CRISPY

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 January 2010

Celestial [ethereal] mail are nothing but our thoughts…we dump in ether by penta or more bytes every picoseconds…LOL! Swami Vivekananda once opined all our thoughts are stored in subtle form…in ether…and operates thro’ the thinker or others especially Noble Thoughts faster than others...Thanks Sir… 10 [from heart] Ms. Nivedita UK

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Winnie Angel 31 December 2009

Well written piece. Yeah its so common but well written...Winnie

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Antonio Liao 14 July 2009

usual matter, we do...yet! special action it rejoice…..such wonderful poem of simplicity in a mess world....thank for the reminder....a 10 +

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a very clever mail...sir please read my ' a vote for 49 o' and 'a spring'

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