Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 206,949 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Majestic Morning - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Rising sun with new rays say
Come on and fly dear birds
I shall show you path to sky
Newly you will fill life light.

I am the truth of majestic dawn
Everyday I do duty for purity
I rise to gift you morning
Breaking past night I come near.

You creatures awake for creator
God has given command to time
This has started blowing wind
Beauty of life you feel soon dear.

Majestic morning is gorgeous
Poets get up and write new poems
Adoring god we all sing glory
I am the rising sun you see here.

Topic(s) of this poem: morning, nature

Comments about Majestic Morning by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Alex Sarich (11/26/2015 3:22:00 PM)

    I enjoyed your poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Alex Sarich (11/26/2015 3:20:00 PM)

    well said. I enjoyed the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Life Sparkles (11/22/2015 7:30:00 PM)

    you are indeed the rising sun

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  • (11/22/2015 3:54:00 PM)

    As I write this, It is a 'majestic, gorgeous morning outside'. This morning is a time of hope, time to thank God for the day which He has created. M. Walker. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/22/2015 7:16:00 AM)

    Morning is the best time to receive the fresh and new ideas, very well said, sir. (Report) Reply

  • (11/21/2015 10:18:00 PM)

    The beautiful poem in the form of a soliloquy of the Sun god is refreshing to mind of human, in a way it is a prayer praising the bountiful Creator. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 21, 2015

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