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Majesty Turned Murderer

Rating: 3.8

The ocean was once a place
Of beauty and grace
Nevermore shall it be
Since it took them away from me
I hate the sea

The couple Kami and Gene
Have since never been seen
Lost in an inferno of blue
All that was found was his shoe

The worst of fears came true
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Mary Lyle 07 November 2005

I found this to be very deep/strong with a complete sense of your trepidation towards the sea.

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Kim McInnis 13 March 2005

I am in awe of your bravery. It takes a lot of strength to write about something that touches so deep. But you took the chance, and created something thoughtful and lyrical, therefore beautiful. I'm proud of you.

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Poetry Hound 12 March 2005

Wow, pretty powerful.

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