She was walking on the other shore.
My heart wanted to run to her
on the other beautiful shore.
But I controlled myself and sat
under this tree full of flowers.
It was such a desire and wished
that she runs up to me on this shore.
But she came slowly,
making me feel the pain of waiting.
such a nice poem.........it clearly expressed each and every feeling and the feeling how we feel when we wait for some body.......very well penned dear poet!
A BIG WOOOWWWW for this awesome poem.. Enjoyed every bit of it.. Very true and very natural poem.. Waiting for someone we love is very difficult (and even if they are coming towards us in their normal pace we feel they are doing it purposely.... Lols. Just kidding..) Beautifully penned.. A perfect 10+++
this waiting is wonderful, the sweetest anxiety!
In love, waiting is a bitter and sweet thing. You wrote a beautiful love poem for Waiting. Enjoyed.
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You write so beautiful love poems dear Dev! 10
Romance need a women also needs many things. Have a nice day.10+++++++++++++++
Dear Poet Dev, It is worthy to wait for someone who truly cares and is willing to be waited...(hehehe) .. Nice poem...I feel the anxiety and discomfort while waiting.... Sincerely, diane
My heart wanted to run to her.... expressing the feelings of a one who loves..Good Poem
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Making me feel the pain of waiting, Oh dear Poet, you know there is a pleasure in wating, it is even thrilling, the intencity matters how deep you love the other, and how important he or she is.