Making Sweet Lovecake. Poem by Fay Slimm

Making Sweet Lovecake.

Rating: 5.0


What are the makings for sweet lovecake?

When the fruit's ripe for picking
And when nectar starts dripping,
Then seems the time to make love's sweetbake.

Once the love-bug has bitten,
And the heart has been smitten,
It wants then to make some sweet lovecake.

When enamoured and mellow
The red blood cells just bellow
For what they desire is love's sweetcake.

As hot lips taste the honey
And it's syrup turns runny,
What is better than making sweet lovebake?

Just meliferous, treacle-thick,
Ambrosial, candyfloss- stick
Makings are needed for sweetest lovecake.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 01 November 2009

wonderful things go into a lovecake 10

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David Harris 01 November 2009

Fay, after reading this you have now made me love hungry. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. Hugs David

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Rachel Butler 05 November 2009

'Just meliferous, treacle-thick, Ambrosial, candyfloss- stick' Rachel Ann Butler

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Carl Harris 04 November 2009

Somehow, I don't get the impression you were talking about just baking a fancy cake in this delicious and sensual poem, Fay! As are most of your fine poems, it was a delight to read with wonderful imagery from start to finish. And though such a cake might indeed be quite delicious, a lot of crumbs may get spilled on the bedsheets! Another great write, Fay! Carl.

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Eyan Desir 04 November 2009

Its a good write... I just felt it needed a little romance

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sweet.. i want :) ..... yummy.

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Bob Gibson 01 November 2009

Mix longing with passion, like its going out of fashion sweet kisses and cuddles, go in there to! some talking, some dancing, and a lot of romancing a recipe for life, and lovers to do

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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